Queen Of Alcaria

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Description

Talia life was finally going up, for once in her life she had taken a risk and it had paid off, or so she thought, ending up ultimately dying as she was about to enjoy the fruits of her labour, she had found herself awakening within the body of a Princess within a world of magic and cultivators.

Sounds like a dream come true for any fantasy fan right?Wrong, the body she had transmigrated into, was currently in the midst of a coupe, which the predecessor, of course, remained oblivious to. With the death of her parents, she had lost her greatest protectors, and the greedy Governor who remained was eyeing the throne her parents left behind. Luckily, she had a powerful bodyguard loyal to her Father who since then has protected her from harm, which has kept her safe for the time being.

However, how long can this protection last? As the schemes to finally completely take over the Kingdom is growing nearer her enemies grew bolder, luckily she had seemed to bring one thing over from her World which would serve to allow her to gain the strength needed to take back what is rightfully supposed to be hers.

Watch Talia grow stronger, as she works to rebuild and expand her Kingdom, finally she would learn the truth behind her arrival in the World, and that the danger surrounding both the World she was brought in and her Kingdom is a lot more fearsome than she had ever imagined.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2020
Author: Ravios

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 144
Views: 41,394

Chapters(44 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

Lord TurtleRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I definitely recommend giving this a chance
Main takeaway: To avoid spoiling anything too relavant all I will say is that this story does the idea of reincarnation really interestingly and just being reincarnated might not be the end of the cycle. Beyond that there is currently still a lot of room for the plot to develop and it is still in the process of setting up future plot points, characters, and ideas.
My main critique of this would some of the character transitions happen a bit jarringly as in we end up following one character's thoughts and the next paragraph becomes another person's thoughts. It is but a minor gripe and doesn't hurt the story overall.
GuthanRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
I'll start off by saying this story has a decent plot. It's been done before but the author tries to make it interesting. The grammar is very rough and takes away from the story, so often that I have to reread a section to understand what is actually going on.
The jarring nature of this story lies in the tone and setting. The main character is isekai into a fantasy world, except here's a twist; now the main character is isekai into a game world when she sleeps. I applaud the idea but it has issues.
The most egregious is the 'real' world being a cultivator world and the 'game' world running off western magic litrpg. Every time I see the character refer to mana as essence or refer to a goblin shaman as a expert practioner it breaks my immersion. It's honestly so jarring that it takes me entirely out of the story. Lots of details are glossed over on exactly how the mechanics of both worlds work, only that cultivator world and magic world run off entirely different systems and energy.
Why refer to mana as essence when she notes actual cultivator magic is completely different from the western magic and runs off a different energy source. It just confuses the readers.
The tier system in this is also a mess. The MC refers often to the cultivator tier system, but yet again the magic world runs off different mechanisms so a cultivator tier 5 beast would not translate well as an analogue to the magic world. I guess that would be level 250? Mana supposedly makes you stronger the more you got but how the hmm is that supposed to be intuitive when the author has only explained the cultivator system for monsters so far?