Purple Lightning Emperor

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Description

This is a story about Shad, a young orphan who was struck by lightning. Instead of dying, he was reborn into another world known as Eidrin. The ambient mana on Eidrin is extremely dense and abundant, allowing mages to reign supreme over the rest of the populace. Follow Shad as he develops the strength to survive in this new world and reaches heights thought to be unattainable for mortals, all in a quest to learn the truth behind his reincarnation and the purple lightning that resides in his soul.

The cover isn’t mine , just found it on google . All the credit goes to the artist that designed it. If the owner of this pic wish for it to be taking off , just let me know.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
Nimero

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.3/ 5.0
Followers
912
Views
849,601

Chapters(139 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • Bob123Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I hadn’t read the the original story so I have no idea the changes that you made , but I have to say , this is pretty good. Some of the chapters are kinda small and the spacing sometime is not too good , but the story is intriguing.  Good work and keep it up.
  • nugyRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Its fun to read to anyone who loves cultivation/magic that kind of thing novels :p could use and editor for the text to format ir to be more pleasing, but stilla very nice read
  • the beholderRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I don’t usually post reviews but I feel this one deserves it because of the two horrible reviews that I can’t seem to find a reason for. The story had excellent grammar I’ve found next to no spelling or grammatical errors which can already be considered a miracle by royalroadl standards it has an excellent mc who isn’t a complete idiot like half of them seem to be or a foolish child who is supposedly a 100 year old man reincarnated which makes no sense he has drive and he’s neither good nor bad he takes a solid stand in the middle which I appreciate as that’s how people are. The story has a plot that seems to be well developed leaving much shadowed in mystery and doubt unveiling one thing at a time to us and the story itself is very original it’s a xianxia story by some standards yet the characters and rankings are unique to the genre as they aren’t cookie cutter everyone die before my blade and highly irrational thought processes. I also like that this mc isn’t some idiot gifted in magic abilities who is a complete jack of all trades yet somehow seems to be the best at everything he does as is common in almost all fantasy works he’s focused driven and doesn’t branch off he sticks to what he’s spectacular at and excels for his hard work as people should
  • Jacob HarrisRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    The only reason I gave this a low score is because it was poorly written with absolutely no grammar. I assume the authors primary language is not English. With that being said I think the story has great potential if he could find a true English translator.
  • MagnumRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    Characters are very flat, but perhaps I just haven't gone far enough into the story yet. Though the characters have cool dynamics between each other, they don't get elaborated on in the beginning.
    The writing style is ok, though the imagery is a tad lacking. The descriptions are either mediocre or just worded poorly. "serpentine eletric sparks" is probably not what you call them, assuming you meant "serpentine arcs of eletricity" or something similar. The wording is also very obscure in certain parts. Perhaps it's because english isn't your first language, but it feels as if you are translating a xianxia novel.
    The grammar I can't really judge as well as the others, but the way the sentences are structured feels extremely off. Sometimes a word is missing from a sentence or the wording is atrocious and makes it hard to read/understand.
    Most of these problems can be alleviated by an editor and a bit more world building, but the story itself has decent content. While I wouldn't recommend it to anyone that cares about how the sentences are written, if you can get pass the poor wording, missing words, and mediocre description, you would be able to find yourself immersed into the world Nimero has envisioned.
  • Rasengan1982Royal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    The overall story and characters are pretty good, with a fairly interesting combat and magic setup. My main issue with the story is that the grammar seams to be getting worse not better as the storyline moves on. I've currently stopped reading at chapter 50 in the hopes the story will be tidied up. I fully intend to check back in a few months as the story itself is pretty decent.
  • CarrotandStickRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    A better version of the standard cliché Xianxia stories that litter this site. The unfortunate issue with these types of stories is they lack an actual story.
    Overall spelling, grammar and sentence structure isn’t bad with only a few minor mistakes of any real note.
    The plot or lack there off is the standard you’d expect to see in every Xiansia story ever. Overpowered character smashes world with a sneeze while everyone is constantly shocked and in awe of the non-obstacles the protagonist “overcomes” yet still underestimate the protagonist for the very next challenge only to have the cycle repeat. Normally this is done to some sort of harem/love interest, however the protagonist hasn’t built one as of yet.
    Recommendations:
    To the author, this review may seem a little harsh but it really shouldn’t be taken that way. Please use it instead to help improve and move forward.
    One of the most common mistakes most new authors make is excess exposition. I.e. I don’t need to know the details of ranks, how your gold is broken down into the various bits of change, how big or small the different countries are and so on. The only time exposition should be included is when it is relevant to the actual story/plot.
    Plot, I urge you to research the hero’s journey. This will help you with your story/future stories overall. Right now your character sort of already exists in the world and is doing things just because. He realistically has no real goal or driving reason to move forward. “Protecting your family”, the way you have established it is to weak of a motivation. I.e. you’re a prince of one of the most powerful nations with experts coming out of every nook and cranny possible, not to mention how individually powerful most members of said family are. This basically means your protagonist has no real reason do anything other than lounge around and under normal circumstances wouldn’t even assume something terrible would happen.
    Character, again the protagonist feels like a walking c
  • TranokRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    Nonsensical world building, repetitive word padding, and an overreliance on power rankings mark this otherwise cliche xianxia story.  The protagonist floats effortlessly from one scene to the next collecting accolades for knocking over straw men masquerading as obstacles.  Women swoon at his manly figure, his peers whisper in awe, and the impossibly numerous nobility impotently rage and scheme.
  • pewpewcachooRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    It's okay for what it is, but it needs a good bit of work. The story is not great, but most Xianxia are not story heavy besides the "get stronger and kill people in your way, while stealing all the women." The writing and grammar all need work and a good edit. Also the dialogue for some of the people needs a lot of work. Older people don't talk like teenagers.
  • EnlightenedPlayer2Royal Road
    0.5
    Nonsensical world building, repetitive word padding, and an overreliance on power rankings mark this otherwise cliche xianxia story.  The protagonist floats effortlessly from one scene to the next collecting accolades for knocking over straw men masquerading as obstacles.  Women swoon at his manly figure, his peers whisper in awe, and the impossibly numerous nobility impotently rage and scheme.