Primordial Sage: Plight of Immortality

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Immortality, a coveted desire shared by many, remains an elusive and unattainable wish. Even the Gods and Primordial beings cannot claim they have an eternal life. To achieve immortality, one must embark on an arduous and treacherous journey fraught with immense pain, endless solitude, and unfathomable despair. Only a select few possess the resilience to traverse this path, yet even they cannot attain 'true' immortality. However, there always exists an exception.

In a nameless village, nestled among rolling hills, a humble peasant boy was born. Unbeknownst to him, he possessed a rare gift, a gift that held the potential for 'true' immortality. Yet, fate had its own designs, for the shadows lurking in the depths became aware of his existence.

And they will definitively not stand aside and wait for him to mature...-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------The theme of story is about man who is almost imposible to kill and the advantages and disadvantages that comes with it. Thus story will contain body experimentation, torture and other such things that are not for everyone. Of course, I don't plan to make it needlessly gory and uncomfortable for people. It won't be detailed that much.

The story was inspired from novels 'Immortal in the Magic World' and 'As an Immortal, I Only Learn  Forbidden Skills. It is mostly about the idea of immortality rather than their story.

Chapters(210 total)

What readers say about Primordial Sage: Plight of Immortality

  • One of the few novels with an interesting story and with almost no cliches, no academies, no Little sisters, no harems. I love this. This novel has none of these trash tropes. Also good world Building and a character that Is consistent, we have a reason for…
    Elias 1.0Royal Road5.0 / 5
  • I am really enjoying the story I binge read it today. I will say it does need a little grammar editing though. Another area I found a little annoying was how much you over explained the main characters specialness during his baptism. You spent quite a few c…
    Pravum VitiosusRoyal Road5.0 / 5

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  • Elias 1.0Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    One of the few novels with an interesting story and with almost no cliches, no academies, no Little sisters, no harems. I love this. This novel has none of these trash tropes. Also good world Building and a character that Is consistent, we have a reason for his being a ruthless character, he isn't the usual goody two shoes.
  • Pravum VitiosusRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I am really enjoying the story I binge read it today. I will say it does need a little grammar editing though. Another area I found a little annoying was how much you over explained the main characters specialness during his baptism. You spent quite a few chapters explaining how he was different and that’s why this was happening or why that was happening etc. It was so done up that it took me out of the story a few times.
    as for the story itself I do love how you’re incorporating the time skips. I really hope you play up his immortality though or long life. I felt that his time with the Bakur tribe was cut a little short you could have stone stay with the tribe until he is in his 40s or 50s I don’t really understand the rush to have him move on so quickly when he has immortality ahead of him. Maybe you have a plan for that but I don’t know
    I’m a fan so far and I look forward to more of your writing keep it up!