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  • TargeneousRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Good story. A bit generic skill type but the method is new and fascinating. The mc is kind of simple for being a cyber master but that's to be expected. Though I am still waiting to see what makes him an apostle to greed for I haven't found anything in his nature that connects him to be a greedy person. The author had made a mixture of many different types of isekai worlds or had hinted that this world is one such like. Further in the story we might get to meet other types . The side characters are playing some important part in the development of the mc and the mc seems like a trusting person but that's to be expected if he is either waiting for his time to get powerful enough or may be it's in his personality. The system present in the world is kinda handy for somethings but not everything is explained to the mc at once so that is good as it is better to find out rather than getting everything handed over. All said and done the story is getting a started now so I am waiting for new chapters to see where this goes.
  • Re_XyRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This story is fun to read.
    While I personally think the characters are shallow, their motivations are deeper than most xanxia stories.
    The protagonists sinfull calling and skill stealing class leave us with curiosity on how the story may progress. All in all, I am thrilled to see how this one will continue.
  • nerodotusRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    A well written, ambitious story on a difficult theme. Style is consistent and poised. From the beginning you get immersed into the strange anime world that you soon start to appreciate and get used to it.
    The author clearly does care about his work and I believe this story has potential to raise further higher-up in the isekai story scala.
    The style is airy, slice-of-life, and it goes hard on the anime tropes (even with side characters randomly giving exposition).
    The story is one of the fictions strong points. It takes some time to get to the meat, and once it does it reveals that the world is more complex than the first fluffy impressions. Gradually the tension ratchets up, more character are being revealed and we get a glimpse of what could be possible in future arcs but as mentioned before it takes time to get to the meat.
    The main character, Alice was a prodigy, an admired talent that gets replaced by the isekaied person. We do not know what happened to Alice's poor soul. The new Alice is an impostor that has a lot of problems with the stolen identity and has no talent for magic.
    Rather than spiraling down a depressive cycle, it is nice to see Alice slowly tap into her true potential, even if out of self-loathing and as a direct result of her decisions blowing up in her face.
    The story is fluid, I haven't encountered any grammar issues.
  • Arthur InverseRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Being swept into someone else's pace is an understatement when Alice finds herself with her rambunctous trolling sister Lorina. She is spirited away as she tries to keep up and make sense of the world that she now finds herself in.
    Both Lori and Alice have been saddled with their parents enormous debt and are forced to work it off, They go on quests to find and obtain wealth in a world of demon lords, monsters and evil bandits.
    The story is a great spin on the classic light novel, by turning some of the cookie cutter cliches on their head.
    I've only taken off half a star on the style as I'm not a fan of first person pov, so it was more a personal preference. That said the story progresses at a pace where you will not get bored of Lori putting on a strong face for his sister while simultaniously constantly gushing over her and teasing her to no end, as Alice continues to be confused and go a long with it.
    Overall this is a story I will continue to come back to. The added illustrations add a great feel to the light novel structure and really help to immerse you. Great stuff!
  • VerilithRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Okay it’s way too early to reasonably place judgement yet in my opinion but it has a lot of potential and I really want to read more of what you have to offer. Tho I do have  a few suggestions.
    One: His current class seems a bit to limited compared to a title like Apostle of greed. You should add some mechanics that show that greed aspect soon or redo how the class work before you get too far ahead(👀I’d personally make that so that can fuse compatible skills like the flame control he just got with a acid control to make a acidic flame)
    Two: MC should definitely aim for the anti-hero type personality and really shouldn’t stay in the sect for too long. He definitely shouldn’t be aiming to become the disciple of that elder. It makes no sense with him calling
    Three: Jun-Ra and Shun-Ya shouldn’t stay virtuous with that kind of back store. After they get they could join MC on a little journey as they slowly leave the virtuous path.
    Fourth: NO making Jun-Ra MC love interest. It’s predictable, cliche and boring. Wait until your two or three volumes in before that and talking it slow. No random woman popping up out of nowhere and MC starts drooling.
    Also don’t let reviews and comments pressure you to much, it’s a new book and it’ll take awhile for you to figure out what works best for you as a writer and what will satisfy your reader. Make sure you’re comfortable with your work so it doesn’t end up becoming a soul suck task that you’ll end up dropping
  • GuthanRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The story so far is pretty solid. The horror in the initial chapters is somewhat subtle. I can say that unless you know what to look for you might mistake this as a comedy at first. The part where the MC gets drugged and becomes competent is hilarious. The loss of autonomy and the subtle mind control influence is especially sinister.
    5/5 so far. I will be following this closely to see how it progresses.
  • ThorgalRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    If you like Japanese light novels then you will like this story as well. Everything you read in the synopsis is something you can expect and is delivered with charming fun. The anime style, anime logic, and well-known personalities have been blended together in a mix of delightful entertainment that has a promising future.
    Bonus: Characters are illustrated inside the novel!
  • MezzoCatorceRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Reading this story was an experience. It's clear from the curated AI art and the attention to detail that this is a story the author cares deeply for. The premise of a world in which the anime artstyle manifests in actual, physical ways is an interesting one, especially once things get going.
    But the story has one major failing, and it's one that I feel might hurt it disproportionately:
    The beginning is frankly a mess. It's under constant revision, and was written in a hurry for the Writeathon, so it's to be expected, but it honestly made it difficult for me to pull through it. The main reason I stuck with it was from other reviews commenting on much the same.
    Mind you, I'll probably update this review if/when the beginning gets fixed, but here's the skinny:
    If you can't handle the frenetic anime prose, just jump straight to Chapter 6. The prose takes a sudden jump up in quality at that point, and keeps increasing in steps until Arc 2, around chapter 11, where it jumps up to such a degree that it feels like an entirely different story.
    Again, this story benefits heavily from the level of care the author is putting into it. Constant revisions on the early chapters, polls on each chapter to get the temperature of whether readers think it needs more work. A lot of love is clearly going into this story, so I look forward to seeing what it becomes.
    Jumping right into it:
    Category TL;DR
    Story: 5/5 - Being Meguka is Suffering
    Style: 5/5 - Goes the Extra Mile
    Character: 5/5 - Characters with hidden depths
    Grammar: 4.5/5 - A few noticeable errors, but high response time.
    Story:
    5/5 - Being Meguka is Suffering
    The start of the story is pretty basic isekai fare, with the main character reincarnating as a genius mage, with none of her memories or skills. We're immediately taken on whirlwind, obnoxious anime adventures with her genki girl sister, who obliviously hurls her into danger.
    This is thankfully just setup for something better, but it still leans a little too heavily int
  • Ellen TaylorRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    I should preface this review by stating I have seen a few anime, but not a lot, so this review is for anyone out there who was curious about this book and worried about whether or not they would "get it" because they haven't seen a ton of anime.
    Don't worry. It's still hilarious. You can stop reading my review and check it out now if you want. I won't be sad.
    With that out of the way, I'll move on to the four different categories.
    Grammar was great. There was nothing that stood out to me or broke my immersion, so well done.
    The style was pretty great. There were plenty of times the writing would describe exactly the kind of anime trope that I, as an unfamiliar anime trope person, would recognize immediately. The giant sweat drop or the rediculous way they ran. It made me chuckle, and I enjoyed it.
    I will be honest for the story. If this wasn't a writathon participant, I would have knocked off another half star on story, because it felt rushed. But the reason why it felt so rushed was because of the writathon, and I simply cannot bring myself to knock of a star for that. Writathon is insane, and I simply wish the author well during this month. I wanted to take a moment to breath in this world, but it was going quite fast.
    The characters, at least Alice and her sister, were funny. Their dynamic was interesting and intriguing, and it was fun to follow them. I was super curious to know what the MC's life was before being droped into an anime. Even if the author wanted to keep the gender ambiguous, it would have been cool to get some sort of sense as to who they were before being dropped. I wasn't even sure if the MC was an anime fan before being dropped into an anime world.
    Overall, it was a fun read. I was chuckling at many of the parts of the book, and I did not feel isolated at all because I didn't know everything about anime. It was handled well.
  • TheMoonlightCatRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    It seems like a nice story but it is to soon to tell because it only has 2 cahpter at this point. 50 words 50 words50 words  50 words 50 words 50 words 50 words 50 words 50 words 50 words 50 words 50 word 50 word 50 word 50 word fifty word