Phantom Song

Self-Published

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Description

This is a tale of a youth from a world ravaged by war. Now he, a former soldier from a black ops department called ""Dragoncross"", is stuck in a new world filled with magic with a peculiar new flame. Since he comes from a world of techonlogy not magic, he has no motivation whatsoever to become the vanguard in war between humans and well everyone else who has resources in this world.(Mature due to language and to understand the MC-s thought process a little better)PSS. i know my grammar sux, so if you are reading this, it is at your own risk of losing sanity :)

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2016
Author: Nalsu

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Rating: 4.4/ 5.0
Followers: 520
Views: 273,640

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Community Reviews(6)

StarlitRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Your story caught my eye right away and i have enjoyed every chapter that you have posted. I like the way you had the main character seeing through the king and the nobles at and glance and the way he has a combat mode and a go with the flow mode is very interesting as well. i am looking forward to new chapter and the way the main character develops.
hilpanoRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
It was a great reading experience... was a bit fast-paced, but not too fast and still capture quite a lot of details of the events around the main story-line. Quite a shame tho it ended too abrupt.. BUT!! that ending is really one hell of a cliffhanger... I know it kind of a big disappointment for such an ending.. BUT THAT LAST LINE!!! It have the possibility to create a WHOLE DIFFERENT STORY ARC!!! OH SO MUCH POSSIBLE STORY!!
Really hope you'd start a new arc based on that ending. IT WOULD BE AWESOME!!!!
FamineRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
This is a really good summoning story. The MC is a boss can't wait to see what he does.
Artimael GreysoulRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Quite an entertaining story with a interesting protagonist.
Some elements of the story are too fast paced and the scene of his father is kind of spoiling it. The story needes more details.
The grammer is quite good except for a few errors here and there.
I just read this entirely today and I liked it. Looking forward to more action.
grinderotaRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Grammar brought this down for me, A lot of things that could have been fixed with some light proofreading poke at my head(like the capitalization of your i's)....it's like an itch that I can't scratch, not necessarily life threatening, but still capable enough to drive a man insane....your story reminds me of Konjiki no wordmaster but branches off to become its own...this would be top potential if you took the time to go reread your chapters and fix the small syntax errors...gotta say I love the MC and how he reacts.....So I will put this on the read later list because I don't want an unscratchable itch...hopefully, in the future, before you put out too many chapters, you go PR or get someone else to do it for you....hopefully, it doesn't end up like another "The Rude Time Stopper"
copypasteRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
Don't mistake me but the overall score before was 4/5... the ending caused it to lose 1.5 in score....
The ending was so abrupt that even I didn't predict it....
Great story it was, alas the ending ruined it completely.
I hope next time you finish a story completely, If you lose motivation next time, try to figure out a way to make the story interesting for you, make a twist?, add new characters?, amnesia? reincarnation? whatever to bring you to write a proper ending for the story.
This story has a proper end, but the ending was more like a BAD END slapped to your face when you played a VN (Visual Novel).
TL;DR:
Story was great until the end came and ruined it. Sadly Author dropped motivation if I read correctly (skimmed thru some posts on last chapter first page.) Alas 2.5 Score, if you want to read it anyway. It's a great story! just be prepared for a BAD END