PAWO: Princess Aurora - The hero villainess of another reality

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2016

Author

alicornfater

• Interlude 1 [Silva Ronte] & 2 [Dream]
  Apr 9, 2016
• Quest 1, Part 11: [Quest Complete]
  Apr 7, 2016
• Quest 1, Part 10: [Meeting]
  Apr 4, 2016
• Quest 1, Part 9: [Magic]
  Apr 1, 2016
• Quest 1, Part 8: [Research]
  Mar 28, 2016
• Quest 1, Part 7: [Failures]
  Mar 27, 2016
• Quest 1, Part 6: [Technology]
  Mar 26, 2016
• Quest 1, Part 5: [Subjugation]
  Mar 22, 2016
• Quest 1, Part 4: [Magic Practice]
  Mar 21, 2016
• Quest 1, Part 3: [Game Start]
  Mar 20, 2016
• Quest 1, Part 2: [Testers and AIs]
  Mar 19, 2016
• Quest 1, Part 1: [Simulation Start]
  Mar 18, 2016
• Prologue
  Mar 18, 2016

Reviews

Community Reviews(6)

• ColdsnowRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I would like to praise the author for writing such an interesting main character who while is strong is not overwhelmingly powerful and while she is smart in somepalces she can still make mistakes or come to the wrong conclusions. It is a breath of fresh air after reading protaganists that are so strong no one else in the world could even come close to matching their power. Also the fact that Aurora will do something moraly wrong in order to bring about the most good for her people is something quite intreguing to read as you see it so rarely.
• Luxuria1Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  The story is about a person that played a game where she was the Guild Master and a ruler of a kingdom, when the game was ending, the MC became one of 500 people that were picked to try the sequel, but when she wakes up, she is in the old game and still the ruler of the same kingdom.
  The MC is very strong, and maybe one of the strongest out of the 500 players in this new world, but she is not op. She can still lose a fight and is not all powerful.
• ShockDroneRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Story is simple but very good and unique. I like the MC, she knows that she is strong but not allmighty and fears the future. I have high hopes ^^
• Pyro1515Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  In response to GRYXX,
  Before my opinion given here I believe some personal background on the reviewer is important to give some perspective. I am a 21 year old college student at the University of Pittsburgh, Computer Science major with a minor in beer drinking and frat parting; now on to the actual review.
  My opinion of Princess Aurora - The hero villainess of another reality is as such, the stories premise is somewhat different for the main character is already in power of a kingdom, however the power is not absolute and she finds herself making the difficult decisions faced by Absolute Monarchs. Having all the power does not mean you will keep it as revolutions and civil wars are always a threat to a ruler. She is not a sadist nor is she a paragon of justice, only one person who inhabits the most dangerous position of the medieval era. The MC must play the part of a ruler which entails many aspects especially managing a population to favor your rule. This is often not explored outside of historical pieces however it was an integral part of ruling during this time. Beyond the justifications of her actions the MC has no family, no friends, no one to trust, and everything to lose. She is backed into a corner in every aspect of the term. The issue on execution is also poorly informed as executions were common place in major cities; so common in fact they were often seen as a form of entertainment for the general public. Furthermore public torture was also common place and most often the cruelest form of punishment was unguarded public stocks, which allowed anyone to do anything except kill the one imprisoned. I am not one to judge much on grammar as a CS major my qualifications to defame ones writing whom I have no background on are not high enough. The style is interesting enough but could use a few different perspective worked in as maybe a side story arc that explored her impact on the subjects of her kingdom. The story has not discernable end point as of now but
• BlackfyreRoyal Road

  ★★ 1.5

  This is an alright story with fairly good grammar, world building and writing style. I saw someone say she speaks old english in the first few chapter but that isn't even close to old english. Not only is it filled with mistakes but a fair bit was just wrong, it felt trying to read a poor translation of a web novel. The protagonist is pointlessly cruel and way overpowered compared to everyone around her including deities. This is explained away with they are only deities and not gods...which is hilarious since a simply check of the definiten of word the deity reveals..
  a god or goddess (in a polytheistic religion).
  divine status, quality, or nature.
  the creator and supreme being (in a monotheistic religion such as Christianity).
  literally god or goddess and a supreme being.  The only thing I really wonder about this story is if she was always this insanely "evil" and how she didn't end up in jail since she is suppose to be from a fairly poor abusive family from what little I could understand. Considering her poor impulse control she should  ofmurdered her family in their sleep long before she was old enough to buy some kind of virtual reality simulator.
• GryxxRoyal Road

  ★★ 1.5

  The premise of the story is quite decent, similar to others I've read like overlord but with your own twist which is good. The main character professes to be a role player and that's why she talks in old English when 'acting the part' but you either need to find out how to actually talk in old English, find an editor that does or remove it entirely because as someone commented in chapter 5 or so; it's super cringey. Actually just finding an editor in general should help because many grammatical mistakes really distracted me from the story and I'm usually not too picky if it's isn't too prevalent. Your character is pretty unrelateable with her excessive actions and I'll be using minor spoilers from the first few chapters to use as examples to demonstrate that. Starting off she orders the execution of people in the adventurers guild that oppose her. Maybe explore political machinations to remove them from position because death being the only solution she even thought of doesn't seem right.. Another solution would be to find out WHY they oppose you and change their minds because people are actually allowed to disagree with how a ruler operates, immediately moving to execute opposition is a dictatorship and not really the benevolent one she makes herself out to be. Because of the extreme actions she makes she even overhears people in the bar/tavern who are openly scared of her and she does nothing to alleviate their very VALID concerns, if anything she validates them herself by pulling one of them aside for God knows what reason  and then manipulating his mind with auras etc, I'll admit that I'm not clear on the reason because I had to stop reading because I couldn't agree with ANY of the main characters immediate decisions. I can understand decisiveness like 'I need to first recover control of the adventurers guild' but the methods leave a sour taste in my mouth(Did I mention that she invents slave collars? Because that will never be abused.) I'm rambling because I'm