Path of the Invincible Dragon

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Description

In the Sunken Zika world where the light of the Purple Star shines, Mwana Jua begins his path on the Way of the Warrior just like his ancestors did. He dreams of becoming a Crystal Warrior just like every other child, but he soon comes to realize that there is much more to power the higher he climbs. His journey is not just to be the greatest, but to bring happiness to his family, to support his love and to fulfil his teacher's greatest dream. He embarks on a journey that crosses life and death spanning across the realms of Demons, Dragons, Magic and even Gods

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: Gitagon6991

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Rating: 3.3/ 5.0
Followers: 51
Views: 83,938

Chapters(155 total)

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Hi_Im_RenRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
About the title, that onomatopoeia showed up in chapter 1 and had me laughing hysterically. Alright, into the actual review. I'll start with the positives, the grammar is really quite good for the most part no complaints there. The world building is definitely present and you can tell the author put a lot of thought behind it. The problem is that this novel takes telling instead of showing to an extreme degree, this was probably the thing that damaged my enjoyment the most. Chapter 4 just about read like a wiki page, and when you have such thick world building the presentation needs to hold up to the same quality. That's my one major complaint other than some rather minor style issues. Inner monologue should be in italics and there is some "misuse" of quotes. Overall readability is good. The pacing is a bit wonky since this story doesn't seem well suited for short chapters. Overall it's alright, I'm sure the author can improve these issues with an editing pass.
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