Path of the End

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Description

In the crumbling kingdom of Aranthia, visions of the apocalypse haunt the dreams of their King, Valerian. Six extraordinary individuals are prophesied to either save or doom the world. Determined to recruit them as his vassals, Valerian sends his most trusted allies on perilous missions to unite these uniquely gifted heroes.

From the half-dryad Selene, bound to a cursed forest, to the shadowy intellect of Blake, a man haunted by his father's mysterious legacy, each recruit faces challenges that test loyalty, strategy, and morality. The lines between ally and enemy blur as the king and his allies confront ancient curses and powerful adversaries like the Aspects of the apocalypse.

Path of the End is a tale of survival, sacrifice, and destiny. The world's fate hangs in the balance as the heroes, with their unique abilities, embark on a mission that could bring salvation or destruction to their world.

(This story is heavily based on anime, video games, and pop culture in general. A lot of the abilities come from said media.)

Information

Status: Ongoing
Year: 2025
Author: xabey229

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Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 6
Views: 5,771

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Community Reviews(4)

littledill27Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The author cook with this one no cap. I also like that peak guy he pretty peak if I do say so myself. Anyway I want to kiss the author just for this story. But go listen to my new album big problem small thing coming out on December 22 of this year it gonna be a hoot
TormackRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I like how smooth your writing is. It is easy to follow and is well paced. Too many books flood the reader with too much background information and introduce too many characters all at once in the first chapter. Your book is a breath of fresh air in that department. It feels clean.
That being said, it could still use a little polishing. As it is, what you have is worth overlooking the rough edges. Nonetheless, a little polish will go a long way. I really recommend editing out the script formatting. Outside of that, great work.
M.E. CheRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Owari no Michi is a fast-paced fantasy story heavily inspired by anime, manga, and video games. It begins with an impactful opening and introduces intriguing ideas right away. The story follows a clear quest structure, centering around a prophecy and a group of important characters who must be found.
The story starts with a strong hook, immediately grabbing the reader’s attention.
It presents interesting worldbuilding and characters with clear identities.
There is a confident sense of direction, making it clear the author has a plan for the story.
Fans of anime-style storytelling may appreciate the pacing and structure.
Owari no Michi is an engaging story with clear potential. It has strong ideas, a solid foundation, and an energetic pace. However, it still has a lot of room to grow. Readers who enjoy fast-paced anime-inspired narratives may find a lot to like, but those looking for a more polished experience may want to wait for a revised version. That said, it’s worth keeping an eye on, as it has the potential to develop into something great.
A.X.RawlinsRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Hey!
I read through the first three chapters. Here are my thoughts.
What I Liked: The energy here is fantastic. You mentioned this is based on anime and video games, and that influence shines through clearly. The concept of a King having to recruit a specific "party" of heroes to stop the apocalypse is a classic, engaging hook (gives me Seven Deadly Sins or Suicide Squad vibes).
The Abilities: I really liked the creativity in the abilities. Pax having "Unfair" abilities and specifically "Unstoppable" is a really cool mechanic that I want to see used in a fight!
The Introduction of Solgryn: Chapter 3 was your strongest moment. The introduction of Solgryn, the Sin of Pride, was badass. Him politely commanding Raze and then instantly regenerating? That established his power level perfectly.
Actionable Feedback:
Dialogue Formatting: The biggest thing that stood out was the use of brackets and script format (e.g., [Valerian: Get in here!]). This can break the reader's immersion because it reads more like a screenplay or a system log. Try converting this to standard prose, for example: Instead of [Elysia: Yes, my king?], try: "Yes, my king?" Elysia asked, stepping into the light.
Info Dumps vs. Action: In Chapter 1 and 2, there is a lot of information given to the reader through lists (The Soothsayer's vision and the Ninja's reports). It felt a bit like reading character sheets rather than a story. Instead of telling us Pax has a heart of gold in a report, wait until Valerian meets Pax and let us see Pax doing something nice. It keeps the mystery alive and shows instead of telling. Its taking a little too long to get to know the characters through what they do, rather than what we are told.
There are a few phrases that are repeated, like "opens his mouth" to signal speaking. You can often just skip the tag or use "said." Extra descriptive language usually comes after - eg 'Jax snarled'.
You have a very vivid imagination and the world-building regarding the "Aspects of the