Paradise Lost - Fates Converge

After 25 years of being a Dungeons & Dragons DM, I completed my largest campaign ever named Paradise Lost. I wrote 4 short stories of the 4 characters participating in that campaign. The stories all lead to a moment in time where the characters first meet and the campaign started. The story of Atreius, a fisherman's son coming of age. The story of Estelle, a rebellious nobleman's daughter. The story of Maeko, a foundling of the Ten Dragons Monastery and the story of Krazar, son of an outcast mage.

I would very much like to have your opinion on what I wrote. Do you like it, or not? What would you keep and what would you discard? All I am interested in is your honest opinion. All that im wishing for is that you will find it enjoyable. Hope to hear from you.