Paler one's
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
A soldier trying to survive a mutated strain of rabies while trying to keep his friends and family alive.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2025
- Author
- Doug Camden
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Views
- 124
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- Iyad imzRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Recommended for thriller sci-fi lovers!
The charachters are good, I like the fact that the mc is the one telling the story, the pacing is good although it's just a Lil bit slow which is understandable to each his taste.
You can fix some grammatically errors (which are not major btw) I was able to understand everything perfectly and it seems like you just forgot to add them or it was a keyboard mistake.
Keep the good work, buddy!!