Otherworldly Adventures

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A destined ruler forcefully removed from her own world. Transferred in a new world, would she have the power to change the norms of this new world?

This is my *FIRST* Novel, so please make a review that I could use for improvements

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Reverse Harem themes.

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As of July 15, 2017, This novel is under editing. I will only continue writing afterwards.

Things to be edited:

1. Point of View

2. Removing Gender Bender themes

3. Removing errors (I won't assure that it's error-free, but I will do whatever I can)

4. Etc.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2016
Author: GullibleWriter

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.6/ 5.0
Followers: 387
Views: 104,533

Chapters(32 total)

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Community Reviews(6)

AllstarallRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Thankfully! For the girls! It’s reverse harem!!!! Yeah love.
The Mc is a cute little girl who is innocent and is over-powered for her age of 7. She doesn’t have her past life memories, only some knowledge, so it doesn’t ruin the whole little-girl theme.
The two males are also kids the same age as her, and they are powerful. One is a Nobel while the other is ‘special.’ There’s big brother love and one sided rivalry. It’s fine since they are cute kids though.
But seriously, the mc is cute. She is moe. She can ask “What is a lover.” Very naturally. She is beautiful. She is op. Her parents are sorta op. Speaking of which, her mom is violent towards her dad, but he’s fine with it. Dad seems normal, but really is a bit out of Wack.
The backstories for one of the males and her parents are well done, and more to be expected!
And also, in one of the recents, there is fluff. Fluff of kitties. Special boy loves kitties.
Yeah. Love. Love hearts love and moe. Cuty kids and blushing boys. Big brother, best friend. Teacher sensei, mother. Father. Sama. Butler. Heroes. Demon kings. Dragons. Ruler. Reverse harem!
LantisRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Review as of chapter 29.
Having read much further than many of the other reviews, I'd like to share my thoughts.
There are a few flaws with the novel, but most have to do with being a new writer.
Firstly, before we get into the nitty gritty- I did thoroughly enjoy the novel; and well, that's all that really matters when you read.
This story is by no means unique to the reincarnated genre, but it has a few twists that make it enormously more intriguing. The only problem is it takes a while for the author to Illustrate the full complexity of his plans until much later.
There are some light grammatical errors - nothing really bothered me.
While the plot and character do not seem unique at first, both are being fleshed out and the story is moving away from the template. This impressed me because it is usually the opposite; where a writer will start off excellently and fall into a cliche storyline. The more I read, the deeper the story gets and the more enjoyable it becomes to immerse yourself in.
The plot will become clearer as the story progresses because the mission is vague from the start. Perhaps, think of it as more of mystery as the protagonist slowly uncovers that the initial goal may not be the correct path and long-standing traditions may be echoes of forgone grudges that shackle nations.
Gender Bender - I will comment on this since so many of the other people seem to mention it.
Let me say that this theme plays a role later in the story. I do not want to spoil anything but I will say it has to do with plans going askew. (It is not to do with messing up the characters gender preferences or sense of identity). While the novel does have this category, it is neither the crux of the novel nor a useless extra. It serves a purpose but Isn't the main issue.
I am hoping in the future to see more on strategies, tactics, and perhaps political maneuvering as I expect the protagonist to have excelled in these areas had he not been stolen by the higher tier Gods. But th
LucidDreamerRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The whole story gets darker every update..
I think that the author is still dumping information now and then, so I won’t rate it poorly right now.
I just thought that there are some unnecessary information
(I agree with Cruxio, since I also think that the main character can start as a girl instead of making it a Gender Bender, which is a bit forced in my opinion)
.. but I’ll just think positively that it has a necessary part to the author’s novel since he’s only released 23 chapters.
I also think that this novel’s going to reach 100+ or more chapters, most probably because of the setting the author left us. I give this novel a high rating since I love long novels (but I’ll change my rating if the storyline would be written poorly)
Overall, It’s a good read for people who wants info dumps from the start.
Style – 4 star, by using [(character’s name): ] style is pretty obvious intention of the author to reduce confusion who is talking at the moment, since I find some RRL novels hard to read because I don’t know who is speaking at that point of time (well, seriously, In some RRL novels, I often mistake that it was still the MC that was speaking in the conversation, but it was the other person instead.)
Story – 4.5 star, can be adjusted if I ever dislike/like the story (Storywise, I thought it was a really absurd idea to use that kind of plotline, so I didn’t gave it full 5 star. I like information dumps in the start since I don’t like those information just inserted for change of story (Most especially for some Wuxia novels, where they insert new information just to change the plotline of the story).
Grammar – 4 star, , since most of the novels in RRL are poorly written. I noticed some repetitive usage of words. (well, I’ll just think that english is not the native language of the author, well it also works for me though, since I’m not an english native.. I feel you bro.)
Character: 4.5 star, I really couldn’t understand why some people find cliche characters hateful. W
brian007Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
*munch... munch* (Grabs pop corn and starts reading)
CruxioRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
An ok story, could have started as a girl(dont need gender bending at all), Good for passing time.
Not to ridicule the story but every chapter is just too short and very shallow. It is like following a bullet list. The transition for each chapter is wide to compensate the length of each chapter. I advice that you just make one complete chapter instead non flowing chapters. Maybe it will cut down 22 chapters into 8 chapters but thats better than relying on chapter count that would get you more "unwanted attention". Like mine
Add detail too. It wont hurt to have your mc to become inquisitive or curious about his/her powers.
Story - cliche
Style - mediocre
Grammar - simple
character - templates
+1 star for effort
RotaRoyal Road
★ 1.0
I found this story as a new "gender bender" a while ago. left the tab open and only had time recently to read it in an attempt to reduce my tab count.
the score is a compound of various issues I have with the story. To keep things simple, please refer to cruxio review because it remains relevant at the time of me writing this, and it really shouldn't.
I have stopped reading at the end of chapter 10 for the sheer reason that I could not summon any will, even by force, to keep reading further.
there is no plot that gives the story or its characters a feeling of purpose.
the characters are shakey and feel shallow in certain aspects.
this is NOT a gender bender, for the sheer fact that this is a story of a female MC, who has ONLY recalled information from her "past life". it is not a case of a male character becoming a female one with their memory intact, which is the simplest definition of gender bender that can be attributed on this site.
the grammar is passable but needs a fair share of work to be improved.