One man army in a marvel universe

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2017

Author

Willox84

• Oh devil take my hand, take me to the promised land
  Feb 22, 2021
• Ascension, limbo and the one in the pit
  Dec 29, 2020
• Life is but a stage
  Dec 21, 2020
• Hell it has a name and its Bootcamp
  Oct 22, 2020
• Goodbye everybody, I got to go.
  Sep 4, 2020
• Just another day at the office
  Aug 4, 2020
• The chains of freedom
  Jul 19, 2020
• White meat or dark, that is the question
  Jun 28, 2020
• Playing doctor
  Jun 15, 2020
• Bullet sponge
  May 30, 2020
• Surrounded
  May 17, 2020
• A plea for help
  May 8, 2020
• Late night visitor
  Apr 30, 2020
• New body new possibility
  Apr 28, 2020
• Well did it work?
  Apr 15, 2020
• Burning bridge
  Apr 8, 2020
• Tears in the rain
  Mar 28, 2020
• Paradise lost
  Mar 22, 2020
• Im okay. Are you okay?
  Mar 13, 2020
• The price we pay
  Feb 28, 2020

Reviews

Community Reviews(8)

• OirkRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  This story has great potential. Keep up the great work Willox84.
• gavin linvilleRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  It good but you must keep it up friend or your patensholl shall perish
  Do keek in mind that the 'MV 'is a Plase of scum and viline
  just like Woshingtin.
  HO I WOOD LOVE TO SEE A LOVE INTRISE!
• Noah NightshardRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  The grammar sucks. It seems like Author is using some software that changes his voice in text. If you read it phonetically it'll be good.
  Now, the story. Usually, I hate when a reincarnated person attached himself to his new family but this story made me accept it. And the building of the MC character is just top notch. At the chapter 14, I'm comforted in the idea that MC won't become a goody-two-shoes hero or guardian. He is built to become a good villain or at least a manipulating neutral character.
  Anyway, Author, keep the good work and find an editor.
• bobbjRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  The story is good and interesting but the grammar needs major work. If corrected, the story would deserve at minimum 4 stars. On the side note, the main character is interesting and it seems like it'll get better.
• CestarianRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  Well the title of the review says it all, the grammar is absolutely terrible, which is obvious from the first chapter, and over 3 years the author appears to have made absolutely no efforts at all to change that, despite getting a lot of comments suggesting the use of tools such as grammarly to help (it seems he's not really motivated to improve his english, do any proofreading or editing or QC on his own story; and the very title of the first chapter should clue you in on how it's gonna be, I mean it's titled "it summer camp I swear.", so make of that what you will.)
  It wouldn't be a stretch to say that the entire story is written in broken english...
  As for the quality of everything else... It's clear that this author has more than just surface level knowledge of marvel's movies and comics, clear because of how many characters he mentions that I've never heard of, e.g. he's probably read a lot of the comics, and he doesn't do that poor of a job of capturing the personalities of some of the characters I know so far...
  But there's a lot of problems too, for instance, right from the start the protagonist is some kind of super hacker, which is entirely unexplained, I mean the excuse is apparently supposed to be that he was a programmer in his past life or something, but it's blatantly obvious that the author has absolutely no knowledge on the subjects of neither programming nor hacking, it's entirely movie tier stuff, just sit in front of a PC, type in abracadabra, and even Stark industries is now defenseless before your mighty hacking might!!
  Yeah, it makes absolutely no sense at all, even the best programmers we have in the real world in the 2020s would not be a match for a 2000 tony stark; as evidenced by the existence of Jarvis, for one (we haven't been able to make anything close to such a sophisticated AI in the real world yet, and not for lack of trying.)
  That's IMO the biggest hole, but there are a good bunch more.
  Besides the flaw of such blatant plot holes,
• HieiUchihaRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  Soo...A couple points, I like the plot so far, the main character is very relatable with in grown vulnerability and doesn't absolutely reek of OP Gary Stu. The main issue is grammar. There were so many spelling errors that it caused the reading to rhythm to be disjointed. I was simple things like ruffle instead of roughly, piste instead of pissed, etc. You reading need an editor or to run your work through a grammar/spell check. Just that alone would help your work alone. you have the potential to rate higher and I hope you continue this story.
• pewpewcachooRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  This needs work and possibly a rewrite. The writing needs work or a good edit and the grammar also needs the same. The story is alright, but there are some parts that just aren't believable at all. Then you have the MC kinda switch how he act's when Fury and Widow show up. It's just not good writing.
• AhuraMazda47Royal Road

  ★★ 1.5

  The start of the story is good, great even. The MC is realistic and grounded. Without any gift, powers and family traits of brilliant mind that somehow skip him, he grew and collect power on his own. His character also likeable and pretty cunning.
  But all of it erased and gone after he met with Black Widow and Nick Fury. He become a simp, beta MC that roll over for everyone. Gone the MC that stand up for bullies, hammer and shield agents when he is young.
  Such a waste of good potential from earlier chapters