Once Again into the World of Cultivation

I am taking a break and revising the story. There won't be any major plot changes.

I am not a native English speaker. The grammar might trouble you. I am trying to improve my grammar.

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Liu Ye transmigrated into a cultivation world and joined a sect.

He and his junior sister smiled cheerfully in the sect.

They worked together in the streets of their sect territory to earn their cultivation resources.

Her smile brightened their courtyard.

Together, a dream was built with cultivation as their only goal.

As they marched without knowing the end, they were obstructed by the cultivation world.

Cultivation world threw the powerlessness of the mortal world into their eyes.

Cultivation world filled their hearts with the remorselessness of the cultivators.

A black smoke wrapped their dreams. And a viel covered their eyes.

The endless path is filled with many questions.

The cultivation world threw them into reality.

He was heartbroken when his junior sisters' sword pierced through his heart.

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Nothing changed in the cultivation world with his death.

Heaven was unshaken when he left.

Nobody remembered him, except maybe for his junior sister.

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He was born again in the cultivation world.

Nobody cares about what happens to him.

He wants to live a life without caring about them.

He wants to live a life without being restricted by them.

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I use A.I. to improve my sentences and edit my chapters with ChatGPT.

For example:Original:  During the early days of the Phoenix Jade Palace, our strength was not as influential as now.ChatGPT (used): During the early days of the Phoenix Jade Palace, our strength was not as influential as it is now.