Omega System

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One minute, everything was normal, the next minute, Earth became like a fantasy novel. Unique powers called skills awakened in the residents of Earth. The day the world changed was called Omega. A few years after, people decided to found schools that taught children about these skills and how to control them, along with how to deal with monsters and physical training. It was all for the sake of a safer future. These schools were named Academies.

Join Damon Zellar as he experiences life in The Royal Academy in England, while constantly seeking strength. One particular day, he stumbled across a unique system so impressive, that it could shake the power balance of the world, but no one knew about this mysterious power. What is the origin of the system, and why was he granted such a treasure?

An unknown organization is also after his life, causing Damon to discover even more about his past. Will dark secrets await, or a truth so unbelievable that Damon himself wouldn’t even believe it? What will be Damon’s destined fate? To die or to live?

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Authors Note: He receives the system after a few chapters, just if you wanted to know!

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2019
Author: Pandalicious

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Rating: 3.3/ 5.0
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Community Reviews(4)

MissSunshineRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I think it's got potential. I can definitely see it being popular with the younger audience. The story has yet to take shape so I can't comment on it. The grammar is fine. I like the characters so far, and I find the world to be interesting.
All in all it's pretty good, and I'm really interested in seeing how this one develops.
unculturedRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Omega System - it's for people who like LitRPGs. It doesn't really go out of its way to carve its own niche, but if like watching a hapless protagonist climb to the top of the world and beyond, hey, maybe it's your cup of tea.
The style is very rough early on, but does eventually get better. It seems like the author wasn't sure of what they wanted to do and as a result each early chapter is a little different than the one before.
Story is definitely the reason you would read this. It's the classic LitRPG mix of getting revenge and climbing to the top of the ladder, and hey, I chew down that kinda stuff like chapters are potato chips.
Grammar-wise, eh, the author clearly cares enough to proofread but it can be a little on the simple side.
The real problem is the main character. It's like his skull was specially designed by the government to crack walnuts. He seems to have no clue what's happening around him and stumbles through his life like a sleepwalker. I enjoyed my time with this novel but kept hoping somebody would kill this massive dork and steal his role as protagonist.
2_L33T_2_LIFTRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
It is ok but there are a couple problems. First it's really confusing that the MC doesn't now what skills are when he has lived in this Magic world all of his life and has a noble friend.
Also that the girl accuses him of rape and everyone seems to believe her but no one really does anything officially and the teacher just waves it off.
The pacing is extremely slow and everyone just fucking hates the MC just because he is a commoner witch would not work because most people are commeners this is why their are no french royalty if a video got out of that girl bulling him in the beginning or the guy beating the shit out of him there would be a revolution instintly.
Tldr: this story is super slow and cliche and the characters are 2 dimensional and don't have motevs that make sense
Spoiler: Spoiler
sjs9999Royal Road
★★ 1.5
Very stilted. I think the following excerpt from chapter 7 says it all:
”Except for that guy over there. He’s a lowly commoner that tried to rape me!”
Rachel pointed at Damon with disgust, while also adding disgust into her voice. She was trying to convince the class that he had done something wrong!
“W-what are you saying? I never did something like that! That’s a false claim!”
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The class stared at Damon with cold expressions. The 5 girls and 3 boys started agreeing with Rachel.
“That sounds like something a commoner that doesn’t know his place would do.”