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Information

Status

Cancelled

Year

2018

Author

Derthian

• 1 - The Dread 6
  Mar 16, 2019
• 1 - The Dread 5
  Mar 2, 2019
• 1 – The Dread 4
  Feb 12, 2019
• 1 - The Dread 3
  Dec 6, 2018
• 1 - The Dread 2
  Nov 27, 2018
• 1 - The Dread 1
  Nov 17, 2018
• 0.5 - New Beginnings 3
  Nov 12, 2018
• 0.5 - New Beginnings 2
  Nov 3, 2018
• 0.5 - New Beginnings 1
  Oct 27, 2018
• 0 - Rebirth
  Nov 27, 2018
• Artworks
  Nov 17, 2018

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• SimeonrrRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Preface: this story is a re write of an older story by the same name and author.
  Style: the style of this story has improved because of the rewrite. before the story felt less planned but now it really feels like there has been put a lot of time into planning where the story should go and how chapters should feel.
  Grammar: the grammar is most of the time impeccable bar a few small mistakes. i think grammar is one of the most boring things to rate a story on, as long as the story can be read without to much trouble and is not littered with mistakes this category is just useless.
  Story: the story is very interesting and intriguing with how it melds the present and the past together through the use of non intrusive flashbacks which really flesh out the story. the flashbacks give just enough clue's to really pull you in and look forward to learning more about the past of the character.
  Character: Fay is a very interesting character because she does not talk a lot but still feels alive. the best thing about the characters in this story are that you really get a feel for what a character is about and they are not just background fillers for the main character to discard.
  Overall: i think this story is one of the better stories, story wise on RR and really shows off its own unique style.