Odyssies of a Young Girl

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Description

Zoe just wants to complete highschool without anyone not liking her. Instead after the unexpected death of a loved one Zoe finds her world upside down and her heart in turmoil. These alchemic processes of the human soul serve as catalysts in plunging Zoe into new and magical worlds. What -- or rather who -- was just a teenager is now unknowingly a prophet-seer in the making. Join Zoe as she explores rich new worlds and tries to reverse her upsidedown life. Welcome to "Odyssies of A Young Girl".

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2025
Author: fantasypeddler

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 5.0/ 5.0
Views: 2,458

Chapters(16 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

HildegardHopeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I have noticed that there is some problems with the grammar, but it is still easily readable. The story is good. Zoe is a relatable character. The story manages to keep you interested throughout. A problem I have with reading is a lot of the time the first few chapters are boring, but it is a popular story, this is bad. It is good that this does not happen here. I haven't gotten far enough to get a big understanding of the plot yet, but i am interested, as the first three chapters have already emotionally endeared me to the main character. There is curiosity present about Zack. The cop and nurse flirt. This is interesting. I don't normally like romance, but the fact that they are pointed out as having a character dynamic implies that they are more fleshed-out characters that may appear again, and even if they don't it makes the world seem more fleshed out.
I think you should change the title of Royal Road from 'My Bad Novel' to the actual title of the story. Even if you don't mean to make this a full hobby, and it's just something you are doing for fun, I think it has the potential to become well-liked. You have writing talent, and you should embrace it, even if just for fun Soft one.