Nomad Dungeon

Self-Published

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Description

The World where Dungeons exist, an existence that has been a thing of mystery to the populace.

Sudden appearances can cause disturbance among the populace.

If a Dungeon has grown strong enough, it is capable of birthing even Demon Lords, Immortals, Dragons, Devils, etc.

The Populace has experienced such things in the past, resulting in dungeons becoming a mark to be destroyed before growing too powerful.

Now a new dungeon is born, housing a lost soul from Modern Earth.

How will this new sentient dungeon survive in this world?

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: SaiDai84

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.0/ 5.0
Followers: 557
Views: 344,297

Chapters(42 total)

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Community Reviews(6)

DraconisMRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
This is an interesting dungeon story. I have read most of the dungeon stories on RR and this one surpasses most in quality and grammar/spelling. This is a good dungeon/ LitRPG I just wish there were more chapters out.
Reviewed at Side E1
ExochromisRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Overall it's light and easygoing story with some grimdark moments. Despite sometimes occuring acts of violent murdering, main character's character gives a good vibe. Storyline is unpredictable and contains a number of twist. Grammar leaves to wish better. The weakest point (for me personally) is style. Author uses storytelling style like in "Kumo Desu Ga": short chopped sentences, dialogue without framing, etc. Not my favorite style, but the good story can compensate it.
ShinyRockRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I really like this story, but it has been on Haiatsu for two months so I am forced to remove a star simply because good plots with interesting characters that then are just abandoned are incredibly irritating. Otherwise it would be four-and-a-half stars: damn near perfect. (five stars would be if it was the 'Portal 1' of dungeon stories and literaly perfect)
This is all because the characters are just fun.
Grammer is iffy, but could mostly be fixed by running it through Word, or any other spelling and grammer checker. This said the characters are interesting enough that it's still well worth reading.
The characters just feel like people. Not like little paper cutouts but actual people with personality and this makes their every interaction a whole lot more interesting. Not entirely sure what it is that gives them this effect, but they are interesting and enjoyable.
Plot: the dungeon core on the run? Trying to figure out how to not be ganked the moment she settles anywhere? plot is kinda eh, but the characters make it work well enough
jwrightRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Up to chapter 32. MC becomes a narrator of his monsters as they carry around his core. New MC is a haughty female vampire with the dungeon core in her pocket.
Also has all capitals for yelling and lots of extra punctuation marks for unnecessary emphasis.
BacchusRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
Too much random capitalization and choppy sentence structure. If fixed could be promising.
The Defenestrated TypewriterRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
Chapter 32
Not sure why I read this much of it.
The idea of a nomad dungeon on the run is interesting but the execution of that idea is bad.
The world-building needs work, no real consistent system and the numbers and abilities feel like they are just being pulled out of thin air.
Also the plot is jarring, no steady buildup or advancement, things just happen "then a mega death beast suddenly appears but I use a new unknown impossible mega skill so it dies"