No horizon in sight

Self-Published

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Description

Out of nowhere monsters started to invade our planet, they destroyed everything on sight and conquered all. Species of all kinds roaming and slaughtering humans. Leo, talented from birth, is ready to face anything to protect his loved ones.

Will humans keep their reign or will it be their extinction?

Novice writer. Writing should be improved over time.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: Mall

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.3/ 5.0
Followers: 56
Views: 33,011

Chapters(103 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

TynianRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
The story could benefit from a first edit through grammarly or Hemingway. Lots of typos, present tense, repeatitions etc..
Otherwise it is fairly standard stuff and a decent enough read for those who like edgy Aspergers MCs.
writing feels a bit lacking in characterisation and ambiance building. The switchs in pov so early doesn t help to connect with any of the protagonists.