New Death
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Neo's life is changed when he ignores his mother's warnings. But Death gives him a chance to find out that his world is a whole lot bigger and more chaotic then he thought, within the worlds of enclosed magic that exist, the trials, tribulations and pain that he will endure. Ending in his confusion that will grab and shift his morals and thoughts about life and death.
(Author notes: This is a first draft and first story released with most of it edited for grammar, the first 8 or so aren't edited by Teaklead. As for the story none of it is set in stone. I'm here to learn, get better and would love reviews and criticism in order to improve.
Thank you
Starfury
Book cover art created by Jessica Dueck - Starscoldnight. Check out her websitewww.jessicadueck.com)
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Starfury
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Views
- 335
Chapters(34 total)
- Chapter 2Jul 21, 2022
- Chapter 1Jul 18, 2022
- Chapter 31 - Owning FateDec 25, 2018
- Chapter 30 - His TruthDec 22, 2018
- Concept Development pollDec 19, 2018
- Chapter 29 - My ObsessionDec 19, 2018
- Chapter 28 - Backstabbing at the AcademyDec 16, 2018
- Chapter 27 - D-souls, AccusedDec 13, 2018
- Chapter 26 - Astral CohesionDec 10, 2018
- Chapter 25 - A Rude AwakeningDec 7, 2018
- Chapter 24 - The HuntDec 4, 2018
- Chapter 23 - The Talmellt's QuestionDec 1, 2018
- Chapter 22 - Sand and BloodNov 28, 2018
- Chapter 21 - Ready, Start and Fall?Nov 25, 2018
- Chapter 20 - The Team and TournamentNov 23, 2018
- Chapter 19 - He's returning earlyNov 9, 2018
- Chapter 18 - His WayOct 26, 2018
- Chapter 17 - Living Metal, Control Training Part 3Oct 12, 2018
- Chapter 16 - Living Metal, Control Training part 2Sep 28, 2018
- Chapter 15 - Living Metal, Control Training part 1Sep 14, 2018
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Community Reviews(1)
- chakforRoyal Road★★★ 2.5The premise is interesting but the style and grammar really drag down the story. Run on sentences, info dumps, and similar issues abound. I didn't notice many spelling errors which is always a plus, but the constantly awkward dialogue really stripped immersion.
Once edited for clarity I think it shows promise.