Necromancer Kaius

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The young king of a small kingdom, Kaius, was on the verge of transcending his mortal limits and becoming a higher being through his mastery of necromancy. Feeling threatened, the demigod Diamund ordered his forces to annihilate Kaius and his kingdom. Before his death, Kaius managed to cast a transcendent magic spell that allowed him to have a second chance at life. The next time Kaius opened his eyes, he seems to have transmigrated into a planet that is currently experiencing a zombie apocalypse! The name of this planet happens to be called Earth…

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: Feeder1965

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Rating: 3.8/ 5.0
Followers: 114
Views: 36,474

Chapters(31 total)

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GuthanRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I'll give it a C+ for effort. The grammar and initial concept aren't bad. The dialogue and plot are where things turn sour. People in this story talk like cliche cultivation young masters. No one in real life talks like that. The plot is not well thought out. Our necromancer is way too juvenile to be ancient. He relies on the system skills instead of using his own spells from his first life. There should be more high level people based off population census.
The military is painted as completely incompetent. They don't have command and control. They don't relay important information before dying. They use rifles but not AP ammo which would kill the special zombies. I'm fairly certain almost 2 years into the apocalypse that there would be a general draft.
It's a fun time waster but if the author wants to improve I suggest rewriting the story and addressing the points above.