Nature

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Nature II, a.k.a Nature's Kingdom:

Worlds are changing. With the rapid increase of hallowed, metahumans, and superpowered beings, hints of events with cataclysmic proportion can be seen on the horizon.

Phenomena that has not been witnessed since the Age of Gods.

Mercy Gaunt, a somewhat popular teenage girl, finds her life turned upside down as she is dropped into the world of ‘Capes’ and mythical beings. A world of war, conspiracy, and political intrigue. Full of battles that have lasted millennia with deep grudges that had taken root in the past.

As she remembers her childhood dream for utopia, Mercy must decide if she has what it takes to protect the people she loves.

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~Do you have what it takes to Fight for your Wish?~

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: Moonfeather

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.5/ 5.0
Followers: 28
Views: 31,418

Chapters(27 total)

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★★★★ 4.0
Story: 4.5/5 The setting and the world in this story are carefully crafted, with many details and a long history of politics and inter-character relationships. I can tell that a lot of care and love was put into the story, and I really appreciate the effort that was put into this to make it work.
The 3 prologues feel a bit... unnecessary. While they foreshadow a lot of things that are important later on, at the time of reading them, they only serve as a confusing mass of infodumping and dislikable characters. These 3 prologues are probably what turn most readers away from this work. If you're not interested in reading that sort of stuff, I suggest you skip the prologues and go directly to the first chapter. It gets a lot better from there.
Everything happens all at once. There's too much going on in one chapter, to the point that it lacks focus. There are so many shocking revelations going around that when you put them all together, it ends up less shocking overall.
Style: 3/5
The style of the story is straight to the point, with descriptions where necessary and a good amount of dialogue.
The author seems to have the tendency to infodump, which seems to be the biggest flaw in this story (ironic, coming from me, since I have the same problem). Worldbuilding is presented in a confusing manner that probably makes sense to the author but doesn't make a lot of sense to the reader. A bunch of names are thrown at the reader the first time with no explanation till later, and when they are explained, it's all clumped together in one big mass, leaving no room for the reader to digest. Feels like after Kazuya each chapter's just been infodump after infodump.
Kazuya's Interlude and chapter 11 in particular feel like obscene infodumps, where tons and tons of information is heaped onto the reader all in one go.
This infodumping problem stops being as much of an issue between Trinity's Interlude and ch 20, since the reader has already been brought up to speed regarding the backgro