Naruto - The God of Shinobi

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Description

A Naruto fanfic where Mc create his own fighting techniques from scratch, not by using plot armor but by using logic.

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One moment, he was just another guy from Earth. The next, he wakes up in Konoha as a four-year-old orphan. Weak and powerless. Trapped in one of the deadliest worlds ever imagined.

No system, No bloodline

Just his knowledge, instincts, and an unknown gift buried deep within.

***Just give the first few chapters a chance.You won't regret it.***

What to expect:

1. Smart and consistent MC2. Training and new unique jutsu3. MC manipulating the plot to his advantage .4. A lot of original arcs.5. More exploration of Ninja world.

Disclaimer:I don't own Naruto or it's characters (except the original characters I create). It's my first fanfic, I'm hoping it turns out good. All reviews and constructive criticisms are welcome.

Discord Link

https://discord.gg/FAc4yVXvvK

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2025
Author: StoryTeller_314

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
Followers: 332
Views: 165,796

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Community Reviews(3)

CrybabyAuthorRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Good fan fiction so far. There are some minor details I can nitpick, but they are personal preference. I enjoy the lack of romance so far, as it gives the story time to grow. Things are usually well thought out, and it doesn’t feel as if his power is undeserved. Sure, it’s currently no ‘The Outsiders Resolve’, but it has major potential. Don’t get burnt out, write what you want to, solid fic.
KingdomHeartsFanRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Here's what I thought about this work:
GRAMMAR SCORE - 10/10:
Not really much to say here, so I'll get the easy section out of the way. As far as I can remember, there aren't any grammar mistakes, so good job on that!
STORY SCORE - 9/10:
The story is rather good, going for a plot that isn't confusing at all (as of writing this review), and I think that is an important quality to have in a work ~ nobody wants to have a spreadsheet open with names and plot points on it, or even worse, having a low connection to the story, meaning you - *shudder* - skim! Thankfully, this work doesn't feel too overcomplicated, while not being so simple that any 5yo can pick up. (depth, people!) The only problem I have with this aspect is that maybe the story is a *little* simple, not to a point where it is noticeable, unless you're looking very closely at plot in order to find faults with it.
CHARACTER SCORE - 8/10:
The characters are, in general, very good! Definitely better than some 1D slop you can find on here, no question! The only thing dragging this score back is that sometimes it feels like more can be done with these amazing characters, although maybe that is just because of how little there currently is posted - not every moment should be an action-packed, soul-rending moment, after all. Fully expect this to get better as time goes on!
STYLE SCORE - 9/10:
The style in this work is very good, I really like how easy it is to digest as opposed to just being block text. Although it does read a little disconnectedly, as having a new line every 2-3 sentences sometimes (not always) feels weird, like it's a comic book, not a novel.
Other than a few small things this is a good story! Congrats to the author than being better at writing than 50% of the people on this (amazing) site!
So'HamRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Why does it look like a copy of Naruto: The Wind Calamity with some editing to make it more rigid?
The grammar is good, no doubt. But it feels to mechanical to read. The character interaction feels like all of them are some sort of know it all and not like kids talking with each other even if the chindren there matures faster. Not everyone can be like Itachi or Kakashi.