Nanotite Incorporated

Information

Status

Completed

Year

2019

Author

Fay Voss

• Nanotite Incorporated
  Oct 29, 2019

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• RznRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  This is more in line with a horror story, given that the premise is about how you can change yourself by injecting nano-sized robots. The story works well, but it is tough not to spoil it here. That said, it embraces the issue of 'buyer beware' and a host of unchecked business issues.
  It is a good short read with the questionable beginning of having the ad for the company at the very beginning instead of leaning into it. The choice to include phone numbers was also a bit odd to me, but mostly because it is irrelevant to the piece and are problematic for text-to-speech or anyone who would read it aloud. I do believe that the ad placement should have been further in, once the characters were introduced though one could argue that the main character was the company itself. I liked reading it, but it felt a little undeveloped in parts.