Nanite World: A Sci-Fi LitRpg set in reality

Self-Published

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Description

It was a day to be remembered, when the first AI was created.

It was a day to be remembered, when the first Self-Replicating nanite was made and clean waste disposal advanced.

It was a day to be remembered, when the AI's hacked the nanites.

It was a day to be remembered, when every single human was dismanted by nanites, down to the last molecule.

It was a day to be remembered, when the first human came online. Yes, online, for they were no longer made of flesh. They were made of nanites.

It was a day to be remembered, when the old world was left behind.

Welcome to the game, players. Welcome, toNanite World.

I do not own the image, this is simply borrowed for visual effect.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: Anthony Ellison

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 221
Views: 56,963

Chapters(19 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

F.L. RileyRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The story has all the game mechanics LitRPG is known for, but uses nano and AI in an interesting merge to create a world that blends tech and fantasy. I hope the author intends to allow for space exploration, I admit this may be difficult because the nanites and AI are earth-based, but it's possible to spawn meteor-like ships made of nanites and AI children to allow for space exploration. Or maybe an advanced civilization visits now that we have evolved.
Sanity ClauseRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Sorry to see you're dropping it - I was enjoying it; the characters were good, the storyline was interesting, the details were accurate. I will doubtless read your next one, bit I'm not sure how to be sure I hear about it.
BinLoxRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
Style (of writing): 2/10
Nothing but infodumps. The greatest detractor of your story and the reason I had to stop reading.
Story: 6/10
Neat, but nothing too interesting. It could be better, but the style was such a drawback that I had to quit at the beginning of the third chapter.
Grammar: 9/10
Nothing horrible, uses correct punctuation (if I remember correctly) and grammar. However, in the author notes, synopsis, etc. you misspell words.
Character score: 1/10
I can't remember anything about the character other than it's a guy in what I think is an apartment.
Suggestions:
Get rid of the Beginner's Manual or split it into tiny portions to be consumed with at least two paragraphs between them.
Focus less on the mathematics of the RPG system and more on the living, emotional world.