My Travels Through Another World: A Dragon's Tail

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Summary: Main character wakes up one morning, as a giant lizard. The story follows him as he slowly figures out where he is, and tries to find how he wants to spend his life. It's a story full of face palms, and misconceptions! I mainly use Wordpress, so the more up to date version is on meanderingotaku.wordpress.com Though... I promise I will catch this up! The next time the writing slows down again. On a final note... I have someone helping me edit and proof reading right now, and I'm trying to look over everything AND write at the same time... so eventually >.> Not because I'm lazy!

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2016
Author: meanderingotaku

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Rating: 3.8/ 5.0
Followers: 191
Views: 133,925

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Community Reviews(8)

grimpotatoRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
The grammar is really good especially considering the standards of this site,
The story is fun in a lighthearted slice of life sort of way, at this point there is no major plot or anything of the sort, it's all very relaxed and at it's own pace.
I'm not sure how to grade style but I personally had no trouble reading the story so it should be good.
The only character that was in-dept was the protag. but, this aspect never bothered me as I was more concerned about him then anyone else.
Also, I really like the thoughts put into time and how it is now seen by the main character since he's now a dragon. I found it interesting and unique of the author to present this point often overlooked.
Thanks for the read :P
Chrystal JungRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
As I said above, it's worth the read, but needs patience. Meaning, it really gets good, touching even when you read deeper into it. The first few chapters, I do not exactly like that much (though it's a little unique page-turner).
Yeah, the grammar isn't bad...but the punctuation...yeah.
To me, the characters are really likeable... except for the mc himself XD Sorry about that. I do feel a bit of empathy when I read this tho... (the reason for the five stars...)
It does have a few flaws but... c'mon guys everyone makes mistakes.
Good luck on the writing, tako! XD
CalamitousRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Honestly so far only the first three chapters was the character actually a dragon and I hate to think that at the rate this story is going we may never see that again. So many stories on royal road as well as other sites say the stories about a dragon and then they immediately turn them into a human or some other humanoid form. It would be great to see and read more stories about an actual dragon being a dragon and not a human having a dragon form. I say a human having a dragon form since most stories the character spends far more time and chapters in human form then they ever do as a dragon and that just makes it the same as any other fantasy story on here. Only using their human form when absolutely necessary and keeping that as uncommon as possible would be an incredibly, and brilliantly, welcome change to the dragon genre.
Ill add actual ratings once the story gets further along but until then I wont make any snap judgement. I only hope this is actually a story about a dragon and not a human with a dragon form.
GrayshadeRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
After chapter 13 it feels like you got a new idea or something and are rushing everything and despite the story's lighter tone you added a few things that make you go "WTF, am I still reading the same story". It's a big no no to me and I stopped reading as of chapter 21a.
Anime-SenseiRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
I am no master of discerning styles but I don’t like the style very much. Story wise it seems really boring and generic. Pretty much matching the previous criteria in score. Grammar improves the quality of the story but still a boring story is a bad story. The MC is boring, he rarely ever uses his dragon form.
Keep writing but always aim to improve. I am not hating on the MC … okay maybe a little. The MC shows little sign of growth and the ones that show up are tiny when they do.
The MC needs to make decisions not based on his stomach and more on his instincts.
The MC needs to be a dragon! A human MC is boring and so overused. Best of luck author! Please take what I said to heart I may change my score then. Please don't disappoint me further with the stupid MC.
-Sincerely, Level 99 Immortal Box Cultivator Boxy / Anime-Sensei / AstralDesire
FlashfyreRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
This MC is one dense as hell human. I say human since he barely uses his dragon form the second he got it. There are just too many inconsistencies in the story to be honest, he doesn't realize hes been picked up and thrown in a cage and in a caravan till they are already well on their way? Really? He was in his dragon form for gods sake! And humans don't even enter his forest, but whats written is often written like they haven't gone back and read their story.
And I get it if you can't keep going back to stay consistent with what are somewhat frequent updates, but it feels as if the world is losing a little bit of its magic everytime these little things are forgotten. A few edits and paragraph rewrites could fix what would else be a losing battle, keeping that initial magic there.
TediousRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
wtf... mc is so stupid i cant handle it and the story is shit
BoredBeyondBeliefRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
Like the other guy said, its not fun to see a non human turn into a human.Maybe a lizard man but otherwise it's just horrible might as well just make the mc a human with horns and call it a day.