My galactic adventure from far far away (Star Wars self-insert fanfic)

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Finding myself on a desert was not in the itinerary, nor was having a tech savants knowledge. At least I have clothes.*Looks up*"Oh, there are two suns."looking back down and not moving for a couple of seconds, I then shout."What the fork!"

(My original is in SpaceBattles)

*This fanfic is posted on the following sites:SpaceBattlesSufficientVelocityRoyalRoadAO3

*Reminder- if you haven't bothered to read the tags, this fanfic is written with the assistance of AI, but don't fear everyone because I only use to AI for the grammar and the flow, I primarily write the content but not in order of a proper sentence - more like a vomit of ideas in sequence and then polished with Grammarly and counter posted against AI to see if it would understand the flow of events. If it looks like it's not proofread, then I really have to discontinue my Grammarly. Thank you for your time.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2025
Author: Jktorres55

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.8/ 5.0
Followers: 273
Views: 104,276

Chapters(55 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

audeaudeRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
Chapter 1-9 is written in first-person (I), from chapter 10 its suddenly 3rd person(Jake). Dialogue is wooden, and characters are entirely 2d cardbords with no depth. Sorry I dont usually give bad review, but this was really hard to read. The idea was great, and with some major rewrites/edits it could be awesome. Best of luck
draed00Royal Road
★★ 2.0
The story starts out rather enjoyable, with solid characters and good interactions/dialogue.
Up to Chp 35 (not yet posted here as of writing this review) the story is written from the MC's PoV with neutral 3rd person used when he is not present.
After Chp 35, the author switches the PoV to every character that is currently the focus of the action, leading to a different "I" as quickly as every other paragraph which is extremely disorienting and sabotages the established tone and feel of the story.
Only recommended for people that enjoy whiplash.
AlkorianRoyal Road
★ 0.5
They're using AI, and I don't believe he is proofing it either. Do with that as you will, maybe don't read it or get his patr~~n as it will lead him to thinking it's ok. You have to be really lazy to use AI and not even give your chapters a read over. I think the author maybe wrote the first one or two chapters