My Bloodysweet : It’s All in My Blood

Self-Published

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Description

The Protagonist is HERE to get you pumped for MY story!Ever wake up in someone else’s body? Yeah, me too.No golden fingers here—just a middle finger from the author himself!Except I wasn’t handed a fresh start—I got stuck in the body of the kingdom’s number-one enemy, a gangster with more problems than I can count.As if that wasn’t enough, this so-called 'normal' world has spiraled into madness. Unnatural chaos is breaking loose everywhere, and I’m trapped right in the eye of the storm.And the harem? Everyone keeps whispering about it, but let’s get real—I don’t even know who they are or how many there might be.What kind of mess did this guy leave me with? Betrayal, bloodshed, and mysteries are my new daily routine, and no one seems to want to cut me a break.But here’s the thing—I’m not the hero they want, and I’m definitely not playing by their rules.They see a villain? I’ll give them one. With powers I don’t understand, allies I can’t trust, and enemies who want my head, I’ll rewrite the script on my terms and f to author.This is my story now, and I’m not stopping until I claim everything, they thought they could take from me.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: InBetweenRealms

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.5/ 5.0
Followers: 5
Views: 5,321

Chapters(37 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

CKJ5Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Disclaimer: This review is based on the opening chapter and may not reflect the story as a whole.
“My Bloodysweet: It’s all in my Blood” is described as an urban fantasy story with harem, supernatural, and romance elements, centered around a male lead.
The opening chapter plunges readers into a dark and deeply personal exploration of failure, trauma, and societal expectations. The protagonist’s biting tone and candid introspection provide the chapter’s strongest hook.
The sarcastic, jaded inner monologue is a standout feature, blending humor and despair to create a protagonist who feels relatable. However, the stream-of-consciousness style occasionally dominates the narrative, leading to sections that feel drawn-out or repetitive. Additionally, the protagonist’s constant need to inject humor into every situation can feel overdone, detracting from the weight of the darker moments.
The first chapter is heavily introspective, which suits its themes but risks losing reader engagement by the end. While this may shift in later chapters, the opening could benefit from a clearer sense of external stakes or narrative momentum to give readers a stronger reason to continue.
Overall:
“My Bloodysweet: It’s all in my Blood” offers a raw, intense view of life and death through the eyes of a sharp-tongued protagonist. The voice and dark humor are the highlights of the first chapter, but tightening the pacing, adding emotional range beyond despair and zingers, and expanding the worldbuilding could elevate the story further. As it stands, it’s an intriguing start with a fairly unique opening concept.