Moon

Information

Status

Completed

Year

2018

Author

NotKyon

• More Information
  Mar 10, 2020
• Hiatus
  Mar 2, 2020
• <Chapter 5: Dragons>
  Feb 24, 2020
• <Chapter 4: The Path to Her>
  Feb 18, 2020
• <Chapter 3: Training>
  Feb 12, 2020
• <Chapter 2: Deities Exist?>
  Feb 10, 2020
• <Chapter 1: Black Box>
  Feb 5, 2020
• THE ROBOTS OF THE END
  Mar 6, 2023
• little wisp come here come here said the team of 4
  Feb 3, 2023
• great apes
  Jan 11, 2023
• 2nd magic day
  Jan 11, 2023
• a magic day
  Dec 27, 2022
• Mo
  Dec 26, 2022
• Pink
  Dec 22, 2022
• Bee, Sun and Tests
  Dec 21, 2022
• Moon
  Jan 9, 2018

Reviews

Community Reviews(2)

• RznRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  The way this reads as if it is like some sort of fairy tale, but its message is clouded and obscured through clever wordplay. It suggests a deeper meaning that breaks down itself for a child to try to understand. The only issue I have is that the circumstances are a bit vague as to what happened.
• ZethinWritesRoyal Road

  ★★ 1.5

  Spoilers, so be warned.
  The first chapter had me excited. Powers were introduced, and we had context for the characters. And then the story devolved into a complete trope-riddled mess in chapter two that shows little improvement in the chapters that follow.
  In the second chapter, we're quite literally introduced to God, the entity that created everything that ever was or will be. Our MC, for some reason, makes God tremble with fear and bend to his will, despite God's literal omnipotence. The MC somehow teleports behind God and puts a knife to his throat; it's a literal "nothing personnel kid" meme trope.
  After the MC finishes interrogating God, we're introduced to the actual world which starts in chapter 3. Sadly it gets worse.
  Because the MC is reincarnated as a baby, he creates a hyperbolic time chamber in his mind to "train." It's straight out of Dragon Ball Z. The MC trains for a week (or the chamber's equivalent of over two years) to dramatically increase his power in the span of a single paragraph.
  The MC wakes up from the his "training" and, well, for some reason the mother is pleasuring herself to her own baby. No justification or reasoning, she just is. The MC becomes offended and gets tired of being a baby so he just makes himself older.
  The husband enters the room to try to fend off adult MC, and the MC teleports behind him and murders him. Then the MC forces himself on the wife/mother after making her younger with his power and kills her too. Not the most likeable character.
  After his murder-spree, the MC is greeted by a group of men that tell him that house belongs to two "S-ranks," the strongest adventurers there are. They question why the MC is leaving their now-wartorn house. The MC decides to kill all twenty of the men for questioning his authority. Then he razes the town.
  Chapter four felt like a fever dream. There were multiple time jumps in quick succession. After skimming the remaining text there was no clear indication it would be improving, so