Miradjinn

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What would you do if you had the power to change the world with a single wish?

Shackled in the shadows, it is the light of the soul that forges our freedom.

In a world torn apart by half a century of war, peace is but a fragile façade.Zayn, known as Sahar the Subversive, hides his identity behind a mask. Gifted with intriguing beauty and unique powers, he pursues an ambitious dream: to become a Soulmaster, a being capable of shaping the world's destiny.

Marked by a painful past, Zayn has been forged in adversity. His power of teleportation and mastery of ruh, the essence of the soul, make him a threat to the powerful forces that uphold an unjust order.

As Zayn fights to change the world and his own fate, he will face impossible choices. In his quest to become a Soulmaster, he will earn the right to make a wish that could reshape the world. But what wish could truly rewrite the future of humanity?

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: Reigeko

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.8/ 5.0
Followers: 18
Views: 7,632

Chapters(32 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

Zenith ZarakiRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Dear Author,
I have not completed your story, but as I read it has dragged me in to the world that you have created. I enjoy the way you have written the imagery through the chapters that I have read. So far, your story seems to have been written as a journal from Zayn's point of view. There are some aspects that I have read that could addressed. During your fox scene, I wonder how Zayn knew what the fox saw. The hyenas, the feel of the sand under its paws and its own thoughts. You shifted from Zayn's point of view to the Sahar's then back to Zayn's. I will say it was seamless and smooth. It just raises the question how Zayn knew what the Fox saw and what it was experiencing. I feel the story is a bit fast paced at first as Zayn is jumping through time through his growth. I also feel that if a week or so had gone by with Zayn stuck in the well you could slow that down and allow the reader to become more connected with Sahar. That way his ----- and Zayn's ----- is more impactful to the reader. Overall, I have enjoyed what I have read. There are some minor grammatical errors, but not many. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more.