Minecraft: A New Beginning

Self-Published

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Description

A man was suddenly transported to a different world.

An unbelievable and very weird world.

Now, he must do everything he can in order to survive and find his way home.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2019
Author: Nayamorac

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
Followers: 186
Views: 149,285

Chapters(57 total)

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Community Reviews(9)

Coconut CoconutRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I like pretty much this story but sadly the autho stopped writing for some reason, also there's more chapters on another website just if anyone wants to keep reading (Only like 4-5 more chapters than here)
Well, if anyone wants to read it, i recommend it a lot, that's all, i recommend it a lot because i liked it. (Pretty good to be a fanfiction)
ArchieEliteRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I've read many stories in the past and only a few of them have left a big impact on me in many ways. This is one of those few stories that I doubt I will ever forget.
I didn't really expect much from reading this, I thought it would just be something interesting to see and move on to something else and completely forget about. Instead, I was left wanting to read more and was excited to see where this story leads.
Style: Brilliant. At first I assumed most of it was just going to be boring crafting/building monolougues, but it ended up being long and descriptive enough for me to really imagine the it happening and wasn't boring or unnecessary.
The POV switches are smooth and interesting to read and also gives the story more life to it.
Story: The plot is great and well done with little to no cliches so far, other than the whole isekai aspect alog with a few things, but they don't ruin it in my opinion and feel less robotic and stiff compared to others.
Not only that but the world itself is described really well but not complicated enough for me to have to re-read everything to get the world lore compared to the massive info dumps I generally have to skim through.
Grammar: The grammar is very good, although I have seen some minor things throughout my time reading it doesn't put me off and is well done. One thing I noticed at times were that a fair few sentences started with I or It (moslty when the MC was refering to what he was doing in his POV.
Character: I can really see the life that have been put into the characters. All of them feel like an actual person and have their own personalities and thoughts that are different from each other. Unlike some that are robotic and just act certain ways for the sake of the plot. Here, the characters feel very natural.
Also, a lot of problems with isekai stories are that the MC just accpets things and move on easily. Or, sometimes they just jump straight into denial and imagine the world is fake and everyone in it doesn't matter
Alex StormRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Just some minor grammar problems. So a 4.5
Quite an enjoyable story.
Jacker41Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I went in to this book with low expectations. I mean, it's a fanfic pretty much about Minecraft of all things. I was pleasantly surprised though, the writing is good, the large boom of releasing early chapters helps as well since it let's the reader quickly read a few to see if it's worth it. Overall it's a great book especially for what it's based on. Hopeful and curious to see where it'll lead.
Lone WandererRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I say, it's nice. It can be better. As the saying goes, there's always room for improvement. Surely, I see a good number of grammatical errors and short sentences, but if you ask a doctor, it's considered healthy. Don't you agree?
kraken2018Royal Road
★★★★ 3.5
chapter one looked more like a prologue, the wierd style format of the author ended there.
There were a lot of grammatical errors specially in earlier chapters, but it gets a little better as it goes on.
The story and the world bulding is not unique but it is still good, it is filled with action, and mystery that keeps the story interesting.
the MC's history or past life will not really affect any future actions in the future chapters that much, nor will be used that much as a reason for his actions as he becomes OP in the story, all i could say is give it a try. its quite nice.
MysteriousStranger3396Royal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I give this 3.5/5
Style: nothing really special here
Story: it's okay but there is a general lack of backstory to the world until later, even then it's easy to glance over and the kingdoms are not really fully explained or developed, just given brief backgrounds
Grammar: While grammar is okay for the most, there is the continual misspelling of some words, misused words and words used in the wrong tenses. While readable it's annoying.
Character: Kind of generic of the entire transported to another world and i'm fairly op compared to everyone else. Doesn't really go through much character development as he basically comes off as a stoic person who refuses to talk or explain anything. His entire character just comes off as forced and crude.
draconixRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Aside from the grammar errors, a very well written book.
CestarianRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
It reads like a bad script for a play, like if someone just reads the lines without any emotion attached...
I've only read the prologue and chapter 1, but damn, would it kill this author to at least write in complete sentences? 90% of the stuff is just line-per-line, and each line is like 3 or 4 words.
Here is the entire sequence for how he gets 'teleported' to the minecraft world.
Spoiler: Spoiler
But something strange is happening.
The road we were walking on is gone and is replaced with dirt.
The surrounding houses are replaced with trees and mountains.
And most importantly.
The kid is gone.
Oh good heavens. What is happening?
I'm absolutely certain the world I'm looking right now.
Is Minecraft.
The protagonist is also some sad excuse of a 24 year old man who works as a 'video game programmer' (rofl) and his only friend in the world is the neighbor's kid who is obsessed with minecraft. It doesn't sound creepy at all that a 24 year old spends all day playing with his neighbors kid (like in person, kid comes over to his house... seriously, what the hell?)
I don't get where the other reviews are coming from, I expected this story to be trash, but it somehow managed to exceed my expectations, it's worse than trash, it's probably the worst trash I've ever seen on this website, it's like the writer equivalent for a digital artist who draws ugly things with MS Paint.
The grammar is barely legible, the story is hard to read through the dry 3-4 word sentences the book is composed of, the characters, well there's only one anyways, reads like an invalid of some kind...
This is not a readable story. It baffles me that it has actual reviews that are giving it 4-5 star ratings for everything. I mean... are they just paid reviews or what? 'Minor grammar problems'? Are these people blind?