Making a World Into Fantasy
Self-Published
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Description
Traversing over into the body of the late Eliott Hearthrom, Lukas finds himself in a new, boring world. Blessed by the system he finds himself changing the world to make it more to his liking and aadding things he could only dream of in his previous life.
"Come forth! Oh ancient magics!""Create unicorns! Phoenixes! Dragons!""Let me become a god of creation!"
[Denied! Host is too weak and incompetent, please do the appointed tasks dutifully.]
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Just writing stuff for fun and without much experience! I appreciate any comments or critiques. Thank you for stopping by :)
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- Wyxir
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.6/ 5.0
- Followers
- 25
- Views
- 11,605
Chapters(24 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- The_WispRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0This story is honestly a good read. The concept of a system giving you the ability to make ur own system is nice.
The writing at the beginning might not be the highest quality out there, but as the story goes on you can see how it constantly improves, and around the time of this review, it stands above the quality of a lot of stories from the average new-ish authors.
There are also a few action scenes, that I find to be written pretty well, the characters are slowly being fleshed out and growing into their roles.
I admit sometimes the explanations of some things are not the best and could definitely use improvement, but I am confident that this will become less of a problem later on with time.
I don't have many other complaints, especially in these later chapters since the author is clearly putting a lot of effort into making it as polished as possible.
All in all, it is a simple story to easily get into and have some light fun. I recommend reading it or atleast giving it a try.