Magna Magica 2.0

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Description

- First of all, this is a machine translation from German to English.

- Before the translated Version got upload, I preupload the german original.

Magnus wakes up, accompanied only by the fragmented remnants of his dreams and the confounding soreness that burns within his skull. A new skull, followed by new arms and fingers.

A new body. And of all places to find himself in a new dwelling, it simply had to be the wilderness. Not known for its morality as much as its cutthroat tendencies.

He has a choice: languish in the leaves or etch out a living in this foreign realm? To turn back or push on? Already the demons of his marred past are catching up to him and snapping at his heels...

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https://www.royalroad.com/profile/108594for helping by and creating of the cover!

@SniperAC8547 on wattpad for help and creating my synopsis

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Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: Seelen

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Rating: 4.0/ 5.0
Followers: 85
Views: 87,484

Chapters(110 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

SrayanRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story is written in German and English, with chapters in each language. Every second chapter is English (well sometimes sequence changes but it's not hard to follow).
Character: Single main character, transported and transmuted (gender change but does not affect plot in any way, except MC occasionally misses his beard 🤣). Also transmuted into human variant with great magic potential. So yes it's a story about someone learning magic in a magic forest. Acquires sidekick (wolf) but other than that it's a while before any other humanoids appear in any significant way. So far only two of these others have had much characterisation.
Grammar: Mostly an easy read for me, but minor grammar issues don't usually bother me. Only twice did I have to re-read to figure out what the author meant - this was due to the quality of the translation, which is not perfect. However, because German is Indo-European, the auto-translation works much better than for Wuxia.
Plot: it's transportation to a magic land, transmuted into magic human (with gender change), mostly solo progression but with a canine "War Pet", and lots of learning new stuff and exploring, good power up stuff really. Done in a very readable and entertaining way.
Well worth a read, obviously if you are a true grammar obsessive compulsive then you will may be somewhat frustrated, but if you lack this personality trait you will enjoy...
Weas97Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
First of all I am not good at grammar since it is not my native language but if I can read it without problems I think anyone can.
Already going down in history we see Magnus now Magna who without knowing how he was reborn as an adult in a new world of magic, in other words the classic, what makes the difference here is that he was not born simply human but is also a sub-race born from the void that gives it other possibilities.
The system is very free since there are no classes or limitations, rather you learn what you want and it is already up to you how to use it without being blocked by anything other than the attributes, what is interesting is that unlike other novels in this not only monsters evolve but all beings can do so including humans.
As for the world so far it has been presented that it may be vast and not yet fully explored (by humans?) And contains a variety of different countries and a great variety of life forms and magic to show as it is presented.
Good fights, moments of craftsmanship and magic from the protagonist.
The protagonist has a logical character so far and is neither a murderous maniac nor someone with his head in the clouds, he adapts well in the world and is to a certain point precarious but neither of these 3 chapters only for a decision, and for what you see is nice, not someone super charismatic or someone ireal rather you seem to me a person in a natural way and not as fictional as others. We have a very nice and comforting animal companion without being annoying accompanying him.
In general a good story to read and of good quality on this site, so far I do not see any hole in the plot or anything of power ups that break the world and it unfolds in a natural and pleasant way for any case give it a try if You read here XD.
GREAT NOVEL AND THANKS TO THE AUTHOR.
EmpireofTrustRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Overall this a great OP GB MC isekai style story
As it is translated from German it has some idiosyncrasies that have stayed consistent involving gender designations in sentences(outside the Gender Bending of the Main Character) and compatriots or comrades or similar designations for enemies.
Neither of which has hurt my enjoyment of the story or dampened my enthusiasm to read more.
Well worth reading
Flea04Royal Road
★★ 2.0
Hard to follow. Grammar and translation were confusing. I think the story has promise, but the editing needs a lot of work. I struggled with the pronouns and dialogs. If the editing ever gets better, I would be willing to give it another chance and re-review it.
Did not finish as is.