Magical Girl Metaphysical: I am the Narrow-Eyed Mob Character

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When the sky shattered, a star erupting on its face, and reality turned into a deranged fantasy, a yandere finds herself fighting not only for her own life but for her love's life as well.

Natasha was anything but a normal and sane girl, but even then, she had never involved herself in delusions of grandeur. So, when a star became engraved on the face of the sky and she found herself involved with mystical forces, she was more than a little confused.

Her head suddenly haunted by a parallel version of her who played her life as a game, along with news about her and her love's death surfacing, she has no choice but to step in. Empowered by some strange orb and bolstered by the fragments of knowledge given by her oblivious but talkative alternate self, she sought to save the dead in advance.

Did she forget to mention that she was stuck in a time loop?

Earth was not okay. It couldn't be, when little girls with control over metaphysical forces roamed the streets.

Unfortunately, that wasn't even the worst part!

What happens when teenage girls and women become metaphysical?

What happens when the world is not just one plane, but multiple? With some more layered than the rest?

What happens when the [Internet] Magical Girl is born!

Chaos. Let’s just hope that a magical girl for that isn’t born to.

What to Expect;

-Yandere MC with OP abilities

-OP Magical Girls that control concepts, and get even crazier later on. Crazy fights on a conceptual level, like from LOTM.

-A large cast, with Multiple POV's from time to time.

-A (hopefully) High Cosmology, like 6D+1-C.

-Societal changes and Internet shenanigans; Chatrooms, Livestreams, and Magical Girl's fighting on Twitter over whether penguins deserve human rights, i.e, normal pointless internet arguments.

-Males can get powers, too, but the method is special.

-This is my first story.

What not to expect:

- Any sort of overwhelming complexity or depth to any characters. I mean, I'll try, but I've only ever written fanfiction before trying this, so just bear in mind.

Chapters(33 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • Yousuf AhmedRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    Has interesting plot, surprisingly dark.
    This is a slow burn and more survival story then magical girl story.
    I would have gave it higher rating but the structure of some chapters are confusing so even after reading it twice you don't know what going on.
    Had to drop it since it wasn't exactly moving fast enough. Other might enjoy it more.