Magical Adventure

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2018

Author

aeragon

• Chapter 10: First year - part 2
  Jun 5, 2018
• Chapter 9: First year - part 1
  Jun 4, 2018
• Chapter 8: First night at Hogwarts
  Jun 3, 2018
• Chapter 7: Travelling to Hogwarts
  Jun 2, 2018
• Chapter 6: The wand chooses the wizard
  Jun 1, 2018
• Chapter 5: A Change of scenery
  May 31, 2018
• Chapter 4: Integrating into magical society
  May 31, 2018
• Chapter 3: One year later
  May 30, 2018
• Chapter 2: Magical home
  May 30, 2018
• Chapter 1: Awaited World
  May 30, 2018

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• newton servalRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  The Story is really good, already looking forward for more chapters.
• Redroajs1Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  At this time this is one of only two consistently worked on reincarnation fanfics in the HP universe where a male main character from the real world is reincarnated into the HP universe in the same timeline as the story's events. The story is fabulously written and absolutely awesome. My suggestion to the author would be to work towards trying to improve the dialogue a bit. Making them talk a little bit more like they did in the actual book would go a long way toward making this story even greater. I personally would also like a much slower pace, but that's just my opinion. Anyways, TLDR: Read this story, it's extremely unique and interesting! :)
• paquitoRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  is this story having romance? because i would love it to have some
• BrenardRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  I am an avid reader of many books, novels, light novels, and fanfictions. So, thank you for creating this story and I hope that you will continue writing many more chapters. Personally I'm just selfish in hopes that you post 10 chapters in one sitting. Other than the fact that I eagerly await your next post, I have nothing more to say.
• RationalMindRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  Don't use a bunch of dialogues after dialogues. Need a bit more expressions of characters between the dialogues.
  But the story is very good. If you can avoid the robotic characters then this novel will be nearly perfect.
• WallnousRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  The characters are bland. Even the mc is bland and i find myself unable to understand his motivations.
  He has no friends and no goals other than to be powerfull(too much like voldemort).
  As a fanfic i would also expect to be shown more of the world that we love.
  I love the idea of "master of all magic" and will continue to read.
  Ps: I hate the mione nickname.
• The Ark BuilderRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  As I said it's my opinion and thus, subjective.
  First of all I am loving it right now, yet I give this 3,5 because it needs improvements for the future.
  1. It needs more character interactions. We know what to expect from the weaslyes yet we need to see the intercations more, or it's just not believeable. We need to see more interactions with his mom and family, the teachers and other cahracters the books and films ddnt expand upon
  2. Needs more content and slower pace. This one is self explanatory. At this stage of the book i can only wait.
  3. He's way too op with nothing to hinder him. Don't get me wrong i love op characters , yet he is the only one to realise how to get strong early?? + he needs a rival or an enemy to get him to improve, most people would want someone to compare him to aswell.
  Over all a solid Harry Potter fan fic just needs more character interactions and content
• Acheron CynbelRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  Spoilers below.
  Like most any idea this one has decent potential but the rushed way the book is handled makes everything feel off. The book reads more like two people were sitting there talking and kept saying "what if this" and they would then elaborate on that before going "What if this other thing".
  It needs more focus and frankly, many of the ideas introduced make very little sense only because they were inserted into the HP universe. IE the meditation thing, if that was something then surely it would be covered in the schools. Something like the music is magic thing is somewhat understandable but something as simple as meditation being able to make you stronger, there is no way that wouldn't be widespread.
  Changing things in an AU fan-fiction is fine, but in doing some things it needs to be done in a way that makes sense when introducing a change ask "Would this be common if it were a thing?" If so make it normal for everyone to do, if not give a reason why the character was able to figure out something no one else in the history of the universe could.
  Grammar is also a large issue, normally I can ignore grammar issues because lets face it most people on RRL are new writers so are still learning, however there are so many issues with this that could be found with a simple proofread that reading becomes jarring when I have to re-read a section because of some odd wording or the wrong word being used.
  As for the characters, the MC is a genius who so far can do no wrong. Everything goes exactly how he plans and even when he does get caught he gets offered an apprenticeship. The other characters are just stale and if I didn't know their personalities from the books I'd assume the MC was walking through a world of cardboard cutouts.
  Overall the story needs tlc but it's an alright read.
• HeritronRoyal Road

  ★ 1.0

  The story Is too rushed and the way peoples interact Is forced and far from normal.
  The worst thing of this fiction Is the protagonist. He Is reborn in Harry Potter world and nothing about his past life is explained. The MC's interactions with his parents are non-existent and he doesn't show emotions in general. This Is not to say that he's cold, he simply doesn't care about anything.
  Other than this, the protagonist is just too good at everything. What Is the fun in reading about a five years old MC understanding books of advanced magic? (And peoples just let him read them, yes)
  Or the fact that at the age of ten he could become animagus after reading a book about It?
  He learns spells without guidance and without efforts. He is fit and has a healthy body because of meditation (again, no efforts).
  In front of a good story, the reader learns and grows up with the protagonist. Here the reader can't empathize with the MC, the story Is not engaging.
• AgasthenesRoyal Road

  ★ 1.0

  Badly written si fanfic. Dropped at chapter seven.
  No character development in any sense.
  Generic reasons for overpowered mc.
  Every possible cliché of hp Fandom.
  There are countless logic holes.
  It is possible it becomes better later on but for me that's not enough to slog through the story.
  I hope you don't feel discouraged from writing in general but you fell in so much Fandom traps it's not even funny.