Made of Metal: A Wailing Blade Chronicle

Self-Published

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Description

Monte doesn’t know who killed his father, and he’s chasing down the Company to find out. When he tracks them to just outside an unfamiliar village, new clues are revealed. Before he can discover what it all means he becomes the prime suspect in a series of robberies. Can Monte clear his name in the village? Are his new allies really who they say they are? Will he live to learn what the Company knows about his father’s death?

Made of Metal is the first installment in the Wailing Blade Chronicle. Each book in this installment is seven chapters.

Arc One: False Edge - Now Published!

Arc Two: It Tolls For You - Now Published!

Arc Three: Son of Perdition - Now Published!

Arc Four: Jeweled City - Now Published!

Arc Five: Clearest Ring - September - new chapters out now!

Arc Six - Seven: TBA (plots are planned out)

Chapters released Saturdays and sometimes Wednesdays.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: charliewking

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.5/ 5.0
Followers: 116
Views: 17,154

Chapters(35 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

BronzeSwordRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
"Made of Metal: A Wailing Blade Chronicle" not only delivers a riveting storyline but also shines in its impeccable grammar and stylistic finesse.
Style: The prose flows effortlessly, drawing readers deeper into the narrative with every turn of phrase. The author's command of language is evident, enhancing the immersive experience and making for a truly enjoyable read. It fits for any reading level and demographic, so I’ve been happy to share this story with my son (when he isn’t playing Minecraft).
Characters: The characters in "Made of Metal" are nothing short of captivating. Each is meticulously crafted, imbued with depth and complexity that brings them to life on the (digital) page. From the relatable Monte, to the mysterious Company, every character feels distinct and fully realized, making their triumphs and tribulations all the more compelling. Whether navigating treacherous landscapes or engaging in gripping battles, the characters remain at the heart of the story, driving the narrative forward with their individual motivations and desires. Oh, and there’s a cat.
Grammar: Flawless, elevating the reading experience to new heights. Each sentence is meticulously crafted, free of errors and inconsistencies, allowing readers to immerse themselves fully in the story without distraction. The author's command of language is evident in every paragraph, with precise punctuation and elegant syntax guiding the narrative with effortless grace. I was left able to focus solely on the rich tapestry of the world.
Story: One of the story’s greatest strengths lies in its world-building. The author has created a vivid and immersive setting, populated with interesting plot threads, differing characters, and intriguing cultures. Each location feels meticulously crafted, breathing life into the narrative and providing a rich backdrop for the unfolding events around Monte and his quest for redemption.
Overall, “Made of Metal: A Wailing Blade Chronicle” is a triumph of storytelling,
GilksRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I'll say it, I am officially on the Wailing Blade train and baby, it's full steam ahead!
Charliewking masterfully weaves together elements of fantasy, mystery, and magic to create an accessible and immersive story that kept me on the edge of my seat from beginning to end.
The protagonist, whose enigmatic persona is as sharp as the blade he carries, sucked me into his world of intrigue and danger. His journey to uncover the truth behind his father's murder by the elusive Company is fraught with peril, but his determination and resilience make him likeable. You can really see yourself in him. The presence of his loyal feline companion adds an endearing touch to the narrative, offering moments of warmth and companionship amidst the darkness that surrounds him.
The concept of the wailing blade itself is both fascinating and chilling, serving as a powerful symbol of the protagonist's quest for justice and revenge. Its eerie cry echoes throughout the story, heightening the sense of tension and mystery with each use (or nonuse).
Fling's writing style is nothing short of enchanting, effortlessly transporting readers to a richly imagined world filled with magic, intrigue, and danger. The descriptive prose vividly brings to life the sights, sounds, and smells of the fantastical realm, luring in readers in every twist and turn of the plot.
Grammar and syntax are executed with precision. I am able to enjoy the story without distraction. Many other RoyalRoad authors take note!
The supporting cast of characters is equally well-crafted, each one adding depth and complexity. From allies to adversaries, each character brings unique motivations and secrets to the table, keeping readers guessing until the very end.
Overall, this is a "must-read" for fans of fantasy and mystery alike. With its gripping storyline, compelling characters, and atmospheric prose, I am eagerly awaiting the next installment in this thrilling series. I'd be very surprised if this doesn't end up on the Rising S
longwindedone1Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Style: "Made of Metal" captivates readers with its vivid and immersive style. The author employs a richly descriptive language that brings the fantastical world to life, allowing readers to vividly visualize every scene. The narrative is infused with a sense of urgency and mystery, drawing readers into Monte's quest. The author's ability to balance detailed world-building with fast-paced plot development is commendable, making the story both captivating and easy to follow.
Story: The storyline of "Made of Metal" is compelling and filled with intrigue. Monte's quest to uncover the truth about his father's death and the mysterious significance of the sword he inherited forms the backbone of the narrative. The plot is expertly woven with elements of suspense, mystery, and fantasy, keeping readers on the edge of their seats. Each chapter unfolds new challenges and revelations, making the story a page-turner.
Grammar: The grammar in "Made of Metal" is impeccable, contributing to the smooth and enjoyable reading experience. The author's command of language is evident in the precise and clear sentence structures, appropriate use of punctuation, and varied sentence lengths. There are no noticeable grammatical errors (that I could find), which helps maintain the story's flow and keeps readers immersed in the narrative.
Character: The characters in "Made of Metal" are well-developed and relatable, with Monte being the standout MC. His complex relationship with his deceased father, coupled with his determination to uncover the truth, makes him a deeply engaging character. The emotional weight he carries, symbolized by his father's sword, adds depth to his persona. Supporting characters, though less central, are also crafted with care, contributing to the richness of the story. Each character's motivations and actions feel authentic, enhancing the overall narrative and making readers care about their fates. Monte's journey is not just a physical quest but an emotional and psych