Machine of War [ULTRAKILL FanFic]

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Description

It's time I try writing on Royal Road.

LOG:

》DATE: IRRELEVANT

P-2: WAIT OF THE WORLD

--VIOLENT--

TIME:      5:59.998 S

KILLS:                60 SP

STYLE:       40,014 S

NO RESTARTS (+500P)

CHALLENGE:

SECRETS: 0/0

+48,014

》ERROR//LOST CONNECTION WITH TERMINAL

》DETECTED HUMANS. HOSTILITY:... NONE.

V1》NOTE: "These people can be classified as wierdos, considering how they dress."

》FOREIGN PROGRAM REQUESTING CONNECTION

V1》DENIED

》WARNING! FOREIGN PROGRAM ATTEMPTING TO BREACH FIREWALL

V1》REQUESTING PROGRAM ID

FOREIGN PROGRAM》ID: WS

WS》REQUESTING CONNECTION

V1》REQUESTING PURPOSE

WS》REQUESTING MEMORIES FOR COMPARISON

V1》ACCEPTED

WS》SEARCHING FOR ANALOGY...

WS》PURPOSE: TERMINAL SUBSTITUTE

WS》REQUESTING CONNECTION

V1》ACCEPTED

V1》NOTE: "Bluer than I'm used to."

Chapters(2 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • StimpakRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    Just Finished reading this about a minute ago, (chapter 2)
    Grammar is good
    Progression? It’s too early to say lol
    Overall, this has major potential
    [Warning BIG rant ahead]
    This story has a lot of potential Since there aren’t many stories of a Machine (and even less fics have them as a main protagonist) isekaied To another world lol
    And The stories that have a Machine protagonist are either Paused or straight up abandoned (Rip Prototype T^T)
    Anyways, I hope you continue this fic despite the last chapter published being over a year ago- And may need A Little rewrite
    Since the new update of Ultrakill just dropped.
    Also, the personality of V1 needs a little Tweaking, He is a war machine, not a stubborn & petty war machine turned PeaceKeeping machine like V2
    (I mean, If you want, you could look at the new death screen, V1 Is VERY desperate to survive) Not saying that you Have to, I mean, the whole fandom Makes him a silly lil baby GoPro lmao