LITRPG: The Great Machine Sage

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With the War Machine System, Hax will create the deadliest machine throughout the universe!It is the 200th Millenium. Humanity has conquered the entire universe.Now, they set their sights on the multiverse.Hax, a human prodigy created with the brightest genes humanity could offer, create the technology for humans and waged war against the other universe.They have conquered one universe, it won't be long before they take another one.But Hax never thought the enemy would come from within.Banished into a strange universe with his past long forgotten, Hax will have to start from the beginning.This time with the War Machine System!His deadly war machine took the new world by storm! He equipped his army with his machine and dominates his enemy. Through increasing his wealth, power, and influence, Hax stormed through every opposition.But as his strength increased so does his enemies. His journey will be filled with peril and hardship."Nothing can stop my war machine!"Join the discord server https://discord.gg/yPtRt29tAg*The cover is not mine. If you want me to take it down, feel free to contact me.

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: Harly_Boy

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Rating: 3.8/ 5.0
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Community Reviews(3)

God Of KnowledgeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
You may see the other reviews spouting it as npc trash, but this is in my opinion a true gem. It contains a rarely seen plot mechanic that stunned me, and possibly carries this review.
The mortals (norms) rebel against cultivators,
Hax the protagonist enables this due to his system, which has the ability to make things.
After the first 20 chapters, the focus isnt all on the mc, but on the progress of the norms and thier progress agains against oppression, as they strive twords their goal I realized this novel, is insanely cool.
The only factor that could be improved is the grammer, of which on a few occasions confused me, but they were but minor issues.
This novel is also quite fast paced, battles every 10 to 15 chapters (Read this on quidian) that take around 3 chapters to resolve.
The characters are NOT bland, the author has painted the battle feid inexplicably well and the character progression of the norms from weak willed to strong willed is great to watch.
The system might seem cheaty to some, like handgun to mech in 40 chaps? But it actually works well with the plot, as the cultivators are starting to get wind if them at that point and are already targeting them
Stronger tech --》stronger foes --》larger battle --》more progession in the norms and tech
While this may seem simple it is incredibly fun to read, so I highly reccomend it.
4.5/5 since there is still improvement to be done.
NemaphiusRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I enjoyed it so far, It's fun. If it goes on the path of inventing, conquering, and creating I think it will it will be fun. I can't say much about the characters much yet because it's a bit slow paced and hasn't establishes much of anything yet. Personally I'm fine with bland characters as long as it's fun but I know people like haveing realistic charecters.
EugenioRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
It's not about making it realistic,it just about making it have at least a little of sense...
Calling the characters bland is an euphemism, the first person he meets is an NPC. Just an NPC useful for giving informations about the world, about society, giving you the opportunity to start your craft ar random, no questions no logic.
Dialogues, obviously, reflect the shallowness.
The system interacts with the protagonist, it doesn't have a personality,for now, it's more like an artificial intelligence.
*Mini useless spoiler*
The system has a shop. I don't think, after all I have already said, I need to add anything else.
Oh right, last little details, the reason that the system use to give only basic information to the user is wrong. Like, physically wrong. Unless the race of the MC and the one in the planet is a primitive one. In that case a lot would start to make sense.