Light Rays

Self-Published

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Description

A different Reality. Anew Life.A chance to be free

Zack Pascal, an intresting end to his story. But an abrupt continuation into a new one.

As he enters a new reality filled with magic, competition and adventures. He will have to continue his life in a drastically different manner.

He isn't a wimp nor is he an idiot, he will do what it takes to continue living life while discovering new adventures and solving past mysteries.

Warning: Gender bender, Chapter length only 500 to 1000,

A:N : I like having chats in my comment sections, probably a chapter every 2 days, the first 17 chapters are less worldbuilding and magic, more social interactions. So bear with me.Beautiful MC, Strong MC, quite straight forward MC.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
eagle_360

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICFEMALE LEADSLICE OF LIFESCHOOL LIFESTRONG LEADGENDER BENDER

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.9/ 5.0
Followers
324
Views
102,251

Chapters(52 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

  • Spartan6522Royal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    I enjoy these kinds of stories, it has a slice of life feel with a bit of action. It definitely gave me toaru kagaku no railgun vibes and I liked that.
    From what I can remember the pacing was good and I definitely got engaged into the story.
    Unfortunately it seems like the first 18 chapters a gone without a trace. I was hoping to re-read this novel but it's kinda hard to do so when missing such a large chunk of the story. I hope they get re-added soon so I give this story another read through.
  • CrywolfsevenRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    It’s got a pretty interesting start I will admit I am looking forward to seeing where the story goes from here.
  • LunederRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    The story has some potential however when I read it the flow is more in an outline or rough draft. Some chapters are so short that they should have been merged with other chapters. flow between chapters skips a bit too much making it feel like there is an entire chapter missing or connecting paragraphs missing.
    I think what would help a lot is if a minimum word count is set for each chapter to avoid putting in random small chapters that do nothing but incread the chapter count.
    I kind of get the impression you are releasing the chapter as you are completing them instead of being so many chapters ahead and when you are not finished with a chapter at the time of whatever schedule you have set you just release the incomplete chapter instead which is the wrong way to do.
    The story is similar to Metaworld Chronicles which takes a lot of the originality from the story so be careful in that regard.
  • WolfieRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    So, amount of errors per 1 k (chapter) words? Usually around 30 I guess. Sometimes more. For example the first part of chapter 24 has 31 errors in 409 words. Counting all of error would take a lot of time...
    As for the setting of the story...
    Spoiler: Setting
    So magic appeared 1500 B.C. but we got perfectly the exact same technology with a few magical gimmics added. The same morals etc. etc.
    The problem is that the invention is fueled by the need. And with the magic, the need for many inventions that lead to others just do not exist. Hence making a whole plethora of gadgets doubtful.
    Pure Disappointment...  One does not simply changes what all culture and invetions stem from and get the same outcome.
    I cannot say much regarding the story score for now, since I only survived to 24th chapter. But at least a few decisions of a few people are highly doubtfull...
    Sure, there are novels that are worse. But I am afraid I have to place this one with a few others to 'Unreadable due to too many errors' bag.