Life hits harder than it should
Self-Published
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Description
A sudden twist in the daily life of a father-daughter pair.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- kafsha
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 188
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★ 3.0The content warning tags have a particular flavor, but I'm going to spoiler a serious one which is a spoiler for the story only because of the severity:
This fiction contains disturbing graphic violence against the young daughter. Specifically torture.
With that out of the way, this piece starts out with some awkwardness given the rough idea being established. It subverts that in the middle and then the story takes a dark turn and just gets darker. The subject of gruesome violence and the actions described are over the top, particularly as the details are frankly cartoonish and go against the established morals for cheap shock value. The prose is fine, but the details and how this goes into the conclusion is weak. It is hard to take the piece seriously because of how it all plays out.