Leo A Journey Through Worlds

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2023

Author

mattecoolio

• Chapter 5 Year four to five
  Oct 27, 2023
• Chapter 4 Year three to four
  Oct 27, 2023
• Chapter 3 Year two to three
  Oct 27, 2023
• Chapter 2: Year one to two
  Oct 27, 2023
• Chapter 1: Year zero to one
  Oct 27, 2023

Reviews

Community Reviews(4)

• Grapefish3612Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I really like the story so far. It’s got a OP MC but not stupidly, and has the other characters be comfortably friendly but not overly/obsessively compliant. I would say it is a good-fun story with well developed characters for the power fantasy genre, and a loveable mcomfertable atmosphere, and isn’t written by a 8-12 year old with anger issues.
• PrinceOfNothingRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I love mc and his childlike innocence despite being a transmigrator, I love the worlds he travels to and the interactions there, the chapters are long, the action is a bit low (but that's normal since we are still in the beginning), but the novel is very gripping and entertaining. Overall 10/10
• Shadow 482Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  First of all I found this novel through the random surprise button in the menu and look where it led me...
  Grammer is not the main focus and it feels like the author does not review it which I understand at least do a free grammarly test, this would make some rare moments where I need to understand what the person is saying mostly (I just forgot the name) the thing you put at the start and " end of a speech sentence."
  Story is best just there is some inconsistency or blunders that characters do, like author please if he can time travel why not till his injuries heal then go back to his universe not like anyone will absolutely attack him in his pocket dimension, can be attributed to foxy fluffy thinking he needs to restrain Leo Sora dangerous behavior so grounded and lecturing
  Style is ok read and see for yourself like chapters are long so in 1 or 2 you'll see it explains the details but does not do so extensively just right
  Now for the thing I must criticize all characters to some degree need to be thought out like their general though process and some other things. Most characters don't exactly act like in the comic and series so on not like I think it's a bad thing they show a different side of themselves but for some characters the author portrays excellently and for some too little though has been put in there.  Now then for one I think the green hair should(you know who I forgot his name) toughen up from the latest encounter and become less of a crybaby and also please update often (ps I can't complain as I haven't updated my novel in ages but I want to start writing and if anybody wants give a review and make me motivated psps I'll still start from September to October at the earliest)
• RedMistRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  Style: The story was actually a somewhat entreating in the beginning, but soon started to fall off. The story is about our main character getting isekai'ed into the world of MHA and getting a quirk that acts more like a system/shop than a quirk; that allows him to travel to other worlds. So far, so good. But it gets held back by the MC and the supporting cast. And the weird limitations placed on the MC.
  Story: The story starts off strong by setting up the MC, and they explain the ways he acts and thinks. It starts off rather slow and a bit of info dump-ish, with is fine and don't mind. But as the story grows, it becomes very apparent that the MC and the cast don't really behave like they should, and only act in the very dumb down way. There are characters that should have acted very differently from the portrayed way they are shown and would have helped the MC in better ways.
  The same goes for the settings/worlds the MC gets placed in, he goes to a world in which he should have been discovered immediately by the inhabitants of the world/universe. But he is always safe, the MC is never in any danger that you would expect by having a power that flings him randomly at worlds/universes.
  The plot is all over the place, and I don't really think I will ever get better, considering the MC power, he will never have a problem he can't solve. Even when the MC makes a terrible decision, he will never be punished for it, because of the plot armor he will never face any real threats or long-lasting repercussions. If you're wondering if It's because the MC knows what he's doing and prepared, well I hate to break it to you, but no. Stuff just works out for the MC.
  Grammar: it's not looking too hot if I'm being honest. There are long runaway paragraphs that should have been split up into 2 or more paragraphs, misplaced quotation marks when indicating speech or outright missing quotation marks, repeated sentences and quite a bit of misspellings.
  Grammatical Composition: The way the c