Legendary Elemental Knight

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2015

Author

The BUSTER

• Chapter 11: Soul Fragments
  Dec 29, 2015
• Chapter 10: Red Knight Stage and Soul Realm
  Dec 29, 2015
• Chapter 9: First Chakra Level
  Dec 28, 2015
• Chapter 8: Four Chakras Body Refining Technique
  Dec 28, 2015
• Chapter 7: Soul Resonance Cultivation Technique
  Dec 28, 2015
• Chapter 6: Disappointment and Results
  Dec 27, 2015
• Chapter 5: Spirit Refining Technique
  Dec 27, 2015
• Chapter 4: Martial Arts Pavilion
  Dec 27, 2015
• Chapter 3: Research, Discovery and Hopelessness
  Dec 25, 2015
• Chapter 2: Pride of Parents
  Dec 25, 2015
• Chapter 1: BIRTH
  Dec 23, 2015
• Chapter:Prologue
  Dec 22, 2015

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• manpapperRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  A really good story.
  I really enjoy the progress so far.
  Keep writing i think you could aim for tops fiction if you don't mind trolls and stop because of them...
• VarkathRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Ch.1-Growth Descriptions.  Seemed fast but actually works more to inform reader as MC still has to discover it.
  Sty:Good, proper POV changes, no random shift/3rd POV just B/C.  Char interaction is well described (not too short/long)
  Sto:Solid progress.  No random jumps around.  Easy to follow w/ logical development/growth building on itself.
  Gram: Properly supports story, no major errors to degrade tale.
  Char: Well Developed.  Consistent.  MC is super smart but gets teased prologue of barely scratching world.  Proper issues with adapting to world from MC Backstory.  Politic reference was NICE!  Backstory of MC would deffin give exp with this!
• GreadeRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  I lost interest on the prologue, although the idea was decent. Compared to other stories on RRL this would be one of the better ones.
• KittenRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  Why drop it, just keep running it as a parallel story.
• vedzRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  chapters links disappeared when i was reading it...i was enjoying it....somebody help me to find links....
• StormingTiger56Royal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  So this is a review of the Legendary Element Knight, there are some problema but canbe fixed. Alright there are some gramical errors, here and there, but the main problem is the 1st and 3rd person changes, this can be fixed, like announcing the change in pov, or keeping it strictly one or the other cause you can't have a cake while eating it to. A advantage to this is if 1st, you can have more surprises and mystery to the story or 3rd, have a more detailed story without the annoying random changes.
  It is very slow, with the age, although in Mythical Tyrant, the Mc is 3 and already have 2 harem members that are older than him, and is already at chapter 30. Also i give you props for actually, establishing the characters and the parents and why he likes them, a lot better than just a guy reborn, and hardly any scenes  with the parents but we have but we have to believe and care, he really cares so deeply, cause with those i feel are really annoying.
  MINOR SPOILER AHEAD, YOU HAVE BEEEN WARNED!
  Alright before i get into my main problem with the story this is a personal preference and does not affect the score. My main problem with this story, Dragons or Draconian why, out of everything why dragons could you think of nothing else, phoniex, wolf, snake, lion, tiger, turtltle for godsake anything else. Alright yes i know that this was most likely planned from the beggining, but i still hate it, and it does nothing to help the story stand out from others that i have read.
  Alright final score is a 3, it doesn't really do anything bad, but it doesn't do anything to stand out from the rest nothing really unique, or rare for that matter. Also i got this from a comment on chapter 22, but the name suits tthe story alot better, Legendary Elemental Dragon Knight.
• copypasteRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  Great story, but somehow after all the info dumping and progress speed it feels like its standing still without any progress and just getting b****slapped with info right into your face...
  M aybe this will change later on but for now
  3 stars
  5 stars for great start
  -1 star for the sheer amount of info dumps
  -1 star for the extremely slow progress, don't take me wrong I like slow progress (well fast as well) but the progress feels like its standing still? it would be another thing if it was let's say... Narut*, On* Piece, Ble*ch where the fights will last like 6000 chapters.... but this isn't even combat...
  on the positive side, I can congratulate the author for having over 19+ chapters yet still be 2 years old.... Not many would be able to do that or last that long for that matter....
  Btw, no qualms with the grammar, thou some of word/meaning reconstruction would be needed. or whatever its called, Maybe an editor would help?
• firedrake915Royal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  (this is as of ch11)
  This story is fine, but it is nothing exciting and contains several flaws.  There are some grammar issues in earlier that, although they don't make the story unreadable by any stretch, still detract from the story.  The info dump in the beginning of the story doesn't make much sense.  Such a large block of worldbuilding information that appears seemingly unrelated to where you are in  the story is something that many readers will simply glaze over, and it is information they don't even need at that very moment anyways.  Aside from the fact that such basic information could easily be worked into any explanation about cultivation given by a character and not the author, I have found it much more exciting to discover such information along the mc's journey instead of in an info dump that is positioned as almost a prerequisite to understanding the story instead of an aspect of the story.
  Next, the mc is supposed to be some super genius, yet this never seems to come through to the reader.  Although he does appear more clever than those surrounding him, this is more a result of those around him seeming like fools than any genius on his part. also, when he is able to understand more than he should about cultivation, this doesn't feel like a result of his intelligence and merely something he came to understand.   This is fine but necessitates a clear and somewhat detailed explanation on how he did so, demonstrating just how clever the mc is instead of simply telling the reader that he is clever .  Though he may be a genius, he doesn't feel like one.
• CiainaRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  Good grammar.
  Well written.
  WHAT is written is the problem.
  Content. This is xiaxia cultivation porn, bascially half of The chapters depict in painful details this or that cultivation tecnique, and the remaining story can be explained in 5 sentences,  top.
  Sorry, but Kinda boring. More meat, less "cool" depiction of the mc exploring his inner energy and stuff.
  Potential definitely there
• 1life4deathRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  The idea and concept behind the story was good but the execution was a failure. The reason being is the vast amount of information right off the bat from the beginning.
  From reading your FF it seems like you were trying to do a mixture of medieval fantasy with wuxia or xianxia. In wuxia and xianxia novels, they would introduce cultivation levels one step at a time along with the story pushing it forward like in Coiling Dragon or Against the Gods. Even if its a big chunk of information, they will space it out still progressing the story. However, in your case you gave everything right out the gate. Making it a drag to read your story as it feels more like reading a textbook instead of a storybook or novel in the first couple chapters. As there is nothing to hook the reader to your story because there  is very little character building and story building.
  Now I’m not saying there is none at all, I’m just saying that in my opinion, too much information is a bad thing as you have nothing to hook the reader to your FF in the first couple chapters which I think are key in trying to draw readers into your story.