LEGATE [A SLOW XIANXIA SUMMONER FANTASY]

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Kal Sorvenn died, and woke up in the body of an enemy who destroyed his nation. Believing himself to be the last of his kind, he navigates the cultivator world while possessing a power unlike cultivation: the ability to create summoned beings, and in extension, armies.Now he has to find his place in the northern prison, pressed between a city of rogue cultivators, wardens who called themselves Sentinels, a looming political family feud, and monstrous beasts roaming just beyond the reach of his isolated home.Pria Summerborn: a mortal servant with a mysterious past. She serves the Sarnasia Family, and was given the task to oversee the young master Lahrs Sarnasia, whose body is presently occupied by Kal Sorvenn.And another character I won’t spoil :P----Updates: 2-3 Chapters (4k - 6k words) a Week — upload will be every Sunday. I’m currently building a backlog.Authors Note:- It’s very, very character driven. I took the liberty of simplifying the xianxia genre, stripped it of anything that I feel can derail the story, and westernized the names. It is not pure xianxia, and it’s not meant to be.- POV shifts, but limited to those within the party of the protagonist. Think Frieren or Dungeon Meshi.

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Status
Cancelled
Year
2024
Author
KyoAru

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ACTIONADVENTUREDRAMASLICE OF LIFEMALE LEADMULTIPLE LEAD CHARACTERSREINCARNATIONCULTIVATIONPROGRESSION

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0.5/ 5.0
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Chapters(16 total)

What readers say about LEGATE [A SLOW XIANXIA SUMMONER FANTASY]

  • “The style of storytelling leaves much to be desired. Little timeskips are commonly used to leave unimportant things unsaid, so that we can get to meatier part of the story. The issue is its used too much, and there is little to no transition leading to or f…”
    DCatRoyal Road0.5 / 5

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  • DCatRoyal Road
    ★ 0.5
    The style of storytelling leaves much to be desired.
    Little timeskips are commonly used to leave unimportant things unsaid, so that we can get to meatier part of the story. The issue is its used too much, and there is little to no transition leading to or fro the timeskips, messing with the flow of story, to the point it feels like we're jumping around erratically even when the story is supposed to be linear.
    I'd understand it if we're going through the viewpoint of someone panicking or something, but no. The story has multiple viewpoints, and none of the character whose PoV we went through are mentally addled.
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    Dialogue. What little action I've seen feels sub-standard, with the summary of the story focusing on the summons and three characters, it seemed like what we have instead is a dialogue-centric story. Dialogue that felt stiff and unnatural due to the writing style, the words themselves don't feel weird, but again, the flow is so messy and all over the place its even interrupting a linear conversation where 2 characters talk to each other.

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