Legacy of the Dragon Clan (Guardian of Seraphiel Book 1)

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Uzman did not know the capacity for human brutality until his entire village is massacred. He lived in a small village in Tanga, hidden from Imperial Inquisitors; where those who wish for peace can thrive. When his village is attacked, he is drawn into the war of gods where the Heavens and the Deep fight for supremacy. In this war, The King of Demons, Baliel, seeks to consume all humanity. To safeguard her people; Seraphiel, the goddess of elements provided blessings in the form of cultivation, to the people enabling them to fight demons and survive. The line of Guardians was given the power to cultivate all elements and rival the Demon Princes in strength. When the last guardian is betrayed and dies, Tanga must survive until a successor arises.

Uzman's greatest desire was to become a forager for herbs and heal people like his grandfather. However, when tragedy strikes, he recognizes an inescapable truth; that only the strong can survive in Tanga. Follow Uzman as he seeks the strength to survive and safeguard his people. But first, he must realize his heritage.

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: Joehart

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Rating: 3.6/ 5.0
Followers: 143
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Chapters(38 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

Cultivation AddictRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I liked the setting. But then again, I am a cultivation junkie.
The premise of demons vs humanity is not new. However, the execution will define the success of the story. So far I can't complain. The language is good though bordering on verbose. The world is young hopefully to be better defined. But the story premise is intriguing
PxslRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
The start of the plot feels really rushed, what good is it to have the story begin in a village if you're just going to destroy the village and its people 2 chapters in, then have the MC travel north for a year all in the third chapter?
It's not a bad way to start a revenge story, per se, but it would have made more sense to start the story directly in the academy, gradually introducing the events that occurred in the village via flashback or conversation.
The grammar is below average, especially the dialogue; it's very hard to follow along with dialogue in the same paragraph and with missing quotation marks:
Spoiler : “I see Lady Tameria has not stopped her habit of collecting strays and undesirables to her retinue. You dishonor your peers by associating with those beneath you.” Go away Prazard, no one wants to talk to you.”
This kind of faulty punctuation happens in other stories too, but is mostly mitigated because each dialogue is given a new paragraph.
Apart from these issues, the writing is decent- just not good enough for me to be able to push through the grammar issues.