Layers Of The Void [Mystery Fantasy GameLit]

Self-Published

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Description

Waking up in the unknown room with the body unrecognized. Alone and lost.

A person whose memory of the past a swirling shadow lined with dread. Somethings had happened to him, things lost within the memory that he must recover.

Something was wrong. Who is he?

Armed with teeth and claws, He must venture through the Rooms. The place of magic and danger. Challenges await him. Knowledge and power beyond anything he can imagine. Beckoning to be reached and grasped. But for what purpose? What is it that he seek? What lies at the end of the Rooms, or is it just the beginning?

Each small step paves the shroud of his mind. Each small scratches clutched the ghost of who he was. And within the clawed hand, who he is.

This story is a combination of fantasy, dungeon-crawling with a touch of roguelike element, and post-apocalyptic world. The first book will focus on the dungeon-crawling part.

It is my first story, and I wish for those who passed by get to enjoy the little cosmos of tale I have conjured.

I will release first 5 chapters and see the responses for a bit. Then continue posting a chapter/week. I will try my best to keep it going despite my bits struggle with English writing, until the story finished, or my body gives. ...please don't be the latter.

The schedule might change depends on how this goes.

I'm a non-native English speaker. Although this work had a help of my mentor/editor friend, any help and support from you is appreciated.You can reach out to my friend as well if you need a writing tutor/editor. Email:[email protected]

Thank you so much to all of you who came and visited.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2024
Author
Norst KP

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Rating
4.4/ 5.0
Followers
56
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14,926

Chapters(29 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • PandaRedRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    While the main character might seem inconsistent, with strange shifts in personality and cutting off their own thoughts (its not a grammar issue) - please read further, this is just one part of the mystery and you should at least read until chapter 8.
    Also there are little to no issues with grammar and while the changes of style are offputting, they really are a plot element rather than an issue of writing
    Please keep in mind the mystery is largely psychological and you are seeing this from the point of view of the main character- whose mind, I might add, is in itself a mystery to solve
  • SandyTheStoneRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Interesting and breathtaking. A million tiny strings, narratives started, that have yet to intertwine into a single plot point. Unfortunately, the end to those narratives, that plot point that is the goal, is stupidly far away.
    I cannot wait for the plot to continue thickening! 😫 So much to read, and none of it yet written!