Landasy Reality: Demon's Rebellion

Self-Published

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Description

Teresa has always loved playing in virtual reality and, while she’s usually preferred offline games, the release of a new VRMMO known as Landasy Reality seems like something she’d truly enjoy. She even ends up making a few new friends in the game and joining a guild.

However, the longer she plays and the closer she becomes to her new guild, as well as to the guild’s leader, the more she finds she’s not quite as happy with her life as she thought. More importantly, she’s not quite as happy with the person she is.

Soon she finds a fresh thought on her mind. Cut herself off from her new friends and go back to the person she was? Or is it time for her to mount her Demon’s Rebellion?

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2020

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.4/ 5.0
Followers
10
Views
6,971

Chapters(20 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • jacobpaigeRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    I think the main problem with story for me came when I realized that the MC has two personalities, and I don't like either of them. I pity one, but that's not the same as liking her. I assume that the primary arc of the story will be the one I don't pity subsuming the one that I do, which would be a good bit of character development, but wouldn't lead to me reading about a character I actually like enough to want to read about her.
    That said, the story is well written, both stylistically and grammatically. It has believable characters and a story that I think some will find compelling, or at least interesting. And as such, I have no trouble recommending that people give it a try.
    The rest of this is here strictly to meet the 200 word minimum for advanced reviews and you can feel free to ignore it.
    I think the main problem with story for me came when I realized that the MC has two personalities, and I don't like either of them. I pity one, but that's not the same as liking her. I assume that the primary arc of the story will be the one I don't pity subsuming the one that I do, which would be a good bit of character development, but wouldn't lead to me reading about a character I actually like enough to want to read about her.
    That said, the story is well written, both stylistically and grammatically. It has believable characters and a story that I think some will find compelling, or at least interesting. And as such, I have no trouble recommending that people give it a try.