Kitchen floor core.

Information

Status

Completed

Year

2022

Author

Spleen23

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Reviews

Community Reviews(8)

• jnobodyRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I didnt have high expectations going in, I figured it was gonna be a romp with some silly antics.
  It most definitely had some silly antics yes but also a very solid story.
  It starts with some blockier dungeon core story but for the most part after it is invested in the characters and how they are interacting with the dungeon, which I havent seen done well in many other completed books.
• DBoyBluesRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Pretty good take on the dungeon core genre, author is responsive to grammar fixes (with few of aforementioned grammar issues to begin with, looks mostly like autocorrected lol). Best bit is due to the author's take on reincarnated core stories, this one comes ahead looking and feeling fresh. I highly recommend it if for no other reason then to use it as an inbetween for other stories. I'm keeping g an eye on it. Thanks author, keep up the good work (helps author isn't so beggy for reviews lol)
• GeneticfreakRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  This is a fun story that's got a good foundation with room for improvement. Dialogue is a little odd at times but not enough so that it puts me off reading and I'm rather sensitive to that kind of thing.
  It's a fun read and not too serious without just being silly which is going to keep bringing me back.
  Chapter length was a bit inconsistent at the start which I assume is because it was a dump of chapters as it's been fairly consistent since, though word to the wise for the author, inconsistency is what kills a story on this website make sure you've got a schedule and pace that works for you.
• Kfaircloth41Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  So far I've enjoyed two of this authors novels so far! This being the second of course. Wonderfully done. Nice endings and I've found myself engrossed in the writing. I don't mind power fantasies but it's nice to get a good slice of life isekia (?) once in a while. Well done! I'll definitely be looking into more of the authors finished works.
• QueenInRagsRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  What we have here is a good idea. A great idea even. A novel one indeed. I love it. I wish I loved everything else.
  It's just missing a lot. Scenes are disjoined and sometimes hard to follow. Speech is a bit too lacking. And description has fallen to the wayside. But why ?
  The problem with this novel is that the author has failed to really flesh out their chapters. Paragraphs are relatively short and overly to the point. The problem is that this author's paragraphs lack a great deal of detail. With things being only occasionally described in loose terms. Relationships between objects, people, things, and the environment are sorely lacking. There are hints at world-building, but we get so little of it in terms of words, that it just feels lazy and contrived.
  This kind of short, sweet, and overly simple writing style works best with one-shots, where the total estimated reading time is expected to be around the 15-minute mark. But with the length this novel looks to be going, because things are only ever described once, you better pray to god you remember the descriptions of everything if something shows up more than once in distant chapters.
  I love the ideas and imagination, its just the writing, or lack thereof, that dearly holds this novel back.
• jlarsonRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  This story has grown on me. We get an origin story about an adventurer who is not a battle maniac (imagine that) and gets reincarnated.
  So there are lots of tropes available, but the real gem is the stability of the protagonist. He does not stumble from crisis to crisis, but leverages his previous experience.
  A second reason to like the story is how mature the protagonist is. Acceptance instead of denial. Planning instead of panic.
• Christopher WesterRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  This is a well thought story. The main character is funny with a more experienced mindset rather than clever. A new dungeon core that begins its growth under a refrigerator is unique. And the main cast of characters is a joy to follow.
  My main criticism is the pace is a little too quick. It feels very evident that the author is having fun, but is just looking for a quick adventure instead of an epic. So the worldbuilding can be rushed and a few plot threads do not go anywhere. But the core of the story is engaging and I found the story to be worth the time. Nicely Done
• ReneeWolfRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  The grammar could use work, mostly due to spelling errors, but it’s complete, short, and not plot hole ridden. There is less than 10 characters you have to keep track of and is fairly simple about what the plot is.
  if you want a quick read, this one’s a good bet.