Kendric Origins book 1: Anunnaki High COMPLETED rough cut - unedited

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Kendric Origins, a 15 year old boy from the Isle of Skye (Scotland) becomes the chosen one. Destined to lead the truthseekers in Earth's most time of need. But he is far from perfect and probably never will be.

Touched by the Source, gifted with unlimited knowledge, still won't turn him into the hero and leader of the truthseekers which he needs to be. Certainly with the treath of Mes-Sanuri above his head, who needs his life energy for her people to survive.

Intergalactic allies need to be found quickly for the upcoming battle and being a truthseeker at Anunnaki High won't be as it was for all the truthseekers that attended Anunnaki High before him.

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Don't expect chique language, no Shakespeare or whatsoever. Just simplified language, able for all to understand at almost any age.

This story contains fiction, aliens, other galaxies, deities, friendship, romance and just the daily drama of teenagers in development.

This book is not based on historical facts nor on the many interpretations that exist about the Anunnaki! It is however inspired by it. Pure fictional writing, which dives deeper into theories which doesn't necessarily means it's the truth about mankind and it's rich history. However, there are myths to be found which are based on findings out of the ancient Sumerian and Babylonian time.

This story it's baseline is set on earth as we know it but with a different future where mankind learns the "truth" of their existence and are awoken out of the matrix that held them as prisoners for centuries. Anunnaki High floats in a by Anunnaki created dimension safe from their enemies. The story mostly continues in space and on earth with some visits to other planets/constellations.

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Information

Status: Completed
Year: 2023
Author: deLeechte

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Rating: 5.0/ 5.0
Followers: 8
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Chapters(45 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

BookshelfRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Overal score
I give it 5 stars simply because I like the story that much. The story is very exciting and sometimes mysterious where you wonder where the writer is going with all this. I think the book has very much potential, maybe after a rewrite where the writer focuses on even more details for the world that he/she tries to create, it will be even better but there is something to say that the writer is leaving it up to the imagination. Many things are described in great detail, like their dormitory. It seems the writer put in a lot and it would be great if all that information is brought back in the next book. I believe that will build up a universe instead of only a world! The added teenage highschool drama, a bit of comedy and the personalities developing, makes this book worth your time to invest in.
Style score
Easy to read, childfriendly. Enough imagination and from an outside perspective.
Story score
The story is what drawed me in and let me crave for more. I want to see Kendric succeed after his rough start. But in the way he is portrayed in the book it will probably take a while. Most elements in the book are well researched and isn't all fiction. That's what I like most. But as soon as you start you understand that this story will never be finished writing within one book. As it is clear from the start that time is against them but you also realise that they still need time to achieve their goals. Which makes you wonder how they will win in the end. But I guess we need patience before we will find out in time.
Grammar score
I agree with the writer that it is simply written and for all ages. I assume that it is unedited since it has weekly uploads and for an unedited version it is actually very well written. To the point, very clear and just easy to absorb the chapters one by one and long for more. A few typos don't bother me, that's what editing is for. But the sentences are clear, when someone speaks is clear also and the emotions that come with that se
Kat14Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This book is very good. It's very interesting so I always read the other chapters in till you upload the new chapter. Your book isn't like the others, you used easy english for people to understand it. Many people use very difficult words in English so people that are still learning English find it probably hard to understand those other books. I like how much effort you put into it. I did saw a few grammar problems but that can always happen. I find it very interesting so I cant wait for book 2.
LoyalroadsRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Character: I really like the storyline, it is very well written. Great character development and I come to like them all but especially Marcellus because of the great dialogues you get a clear picture in your mind of the characters and there is a lot of dialogues between mainly the boy characters. It is the style from the writer to suck you in with all the conversations between the main characters.
Story: As for the story, if you like a slow paced book, this is not for you. The writer likes to jump from one adventure into the other. Which is what I like because I never get bored and actually are looking forward in reading the next chapter.
Style and Grammar: It is easy to read and as the writer wrote in the introduction, for many ages and I agree. The storyline there is where the focus is, not on fancy wording to make a book appear well written without ever getting to the point.
Overall: Chapter 41 and I think the writer is coming to a point where the book will end either with a cliffhanger or maybe just a normal end to their first year at this highschool. Call me a fan! I like how this yet another teenage highschool fiction is somehow different than others. Maybe because of the historical research in ancient history that is obviously done and improvised in this book and the teachings the writer had implemented which is used by characters who have those knowledge. The writer definitely did it's homework and people who read a lot of ancient theories/alien conspiracies and that sort of thing, will find a lot of material in this book, also mineralogy but than the way of how it used in a world where people believe in the vibrations and purpose of minerals. As I said, the writer did it's homework and it must've taken forever to find all that information and to turn it in a very easy to read story with amazing character developing. I do hope to read more from the deity Enki. I think that bond that is created is very special. Job well done and looking forward to the end.