Kali - The First Conflict

Self-Published

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Description

A story about a group of people chosen to fight the impending disaster on the world where Gods have perished.

Key pointers

Story plot takes time to be established.

Takes place in a future advance world.

Different from the world as we know.

Diversity in characters.

Female Primary Protagonist.(Character with same influence as MC also exist in the story.)

Reference from Indian Mythology are included throughout the story.

Detailed Battle Sequences.

Lastly, Cute romance and sometimes hot romance.

And most of all, The Cutsy Main Protagonist

**This story is the first of the'Kali'series**

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: k_mYTH_

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 5.0/ 5.0
Followers: 21
Views: 6,912

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Community Reviews(2)

Raven65Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This book is a real page-turner that draws you in from the very first chapter. The protagonist feels authentic and relatable, with a depth that makes you genuinely care about her.
The world-building is impressive, offering just enough detail to immerse you in its unique setting without overwhelming you with info dump. It’s clear the author has crafted this future world carefully. The descriptions are immersive, they draw you in the story.
The story unfolds in the future, but it’s not exactly the future we know. I won’t tell you more about it as to not spoil you. The pacing is steady, and the narrative remains engaging throughout the first ten chapters.
The only downside I could see, which might explain the lack of attention this book has received, are the prologue and the synopsis. Both fail to do the story justice and may leave potential readers unsure of what they’re about to dive into.
But like I said in the title: you should give it a try, you definitely won’t regret it. Or at least read the first chapter to see if it’s your cup of tea.
This story deserves far more attention than it has been given.
SPC 99Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The story has been good so far. It's far from perfect though.
The plot indeed moves slowly but that's already mentioned in the synopsis so it's not problem, as long as it remains interesting and catchy.
The style of Point of view monologues is good too, it's just not in best form yet. It's similar to So I am a Spider, so what? Just inferior version.
The premise of the story is similar to many other stories but the way it's moving forward, it might be different ( I hope it is)
One of the two things I liked the best is the light hearted comedy that comes in between the chapters to make it more interesting and catchy.
Second one is the world building, put us simply, it's meticulous. The story is occurring in a future timeline and it's been properly crafted. It's similar to what we think of our world in future yet so different. Even the events that shape the world as it is in the story have been carefully decided.
The characters are the cherry on the story. The main protagonist is very relatable and might be the representation of myself. The other characters that have been introduced so far have their own characteristics and they are indeed diverse (till now). I hope the author can maintain the diversity and not introduce similar characters.
English is not my first language so i don't know much of how grammar works, so no comments.
Finally, as I already said, it's far from perfect, but I have noticed the improvement throughout the 25 chapters I have read. It's getting better and maybe it will maintain the trend. I am giving it 5 stars in all section so as not to reduce the reach of the story.
The story is good and you should give it a try. Read 4-5 chapters before you decide either to drop or continue.
That's all I have to say.
Thank you.