JOURNEY

Information

Status

Hiatus

Author

shafi12345

• Chapter 5 – A Mother’s Fear
  May 13, 2025
• Chapter 4: The Arrival
  May 13, 2025
• Chapter 3 – The Queen, the Seer, and the Silent Heir
  May 13, 2025
• Chapter 2: The Crown, The Name, and The Silence of Sacrifice
  May 13, 2025
• Chapter One: The Child Without a Name
  May 13, 2025
• Treasure
  Jun 7, 2021
• Chapter 1
  Apr 24, 2018
• Chapter 15 -City days
  May 15, 2017
• Chapter 14 - We Ride
  May 11, 2017
• Chapter 13 - The Apprentice Regalia
  May 9, 2017
• Chapter 12 - Years and Events
  May 4, 2017
• Chapter 11 - Nature and endless repairwork
  Apr 24, 2017
• Chapter 10 - Starting a business of exclusive clientele
  Apr 21, 2017
• Chapter 9 - Playing with spells and learning lines
  Apr 21, 2017
• Chapter 8 - The Deus-en Script and Academy life
  Apr 20, 2017
• Chapter 7 - The Academy and it's Occupents
  Apr 20, 2017
• Chapter 6 - Leaving home and magic beams
  Apr 19, 2017
• Chapter 5 - The start of the journey
  Apr 18, 2017
• Chapter 4 - Flynn & Lester
  Apr 17, 2017
• Chapter 3 - I am a genius
  Apr 16, 2017

Reviews

Community Reviews(2)

• YarnSpinnerRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Yes, I am the author. And yes, I am giving my own work five stars. I truly believe that it deserves it as well.
• GravityfunnsRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  Almost every paragraph after this first one has been said before the author explained to me their viewpoint, and there are good reasons to refute them. Simply put, they are all intentional decisions to make the story more of a journey for the reader, or make it easier to read. In the case of the latter, it doesn't work for me personally, but I now realise that wouldn't be the case for everyone.
  I don't mean to be rude or anything but there are a lot of issues with this story. First, the description is terribly generic, the only thing that's specific to this story is the main characters name. The majority of isekais I've read are trying to make it realistically what people would do. You also need to provide at least a little bit of insight into the character. What her personality is, her goals, and what sort of abilities she develops.
  Similarly, the name is also generic. Maybe if the story was about someone who's just travelling around constantly, which by itself is a fairly common trope, albeit only because it encompasses a lot of possibilites. I really just have no idea what it's actually about though because, again, you didn't say at all.
  The last issue I saw was the paragraphs, mostly that there are none. I was completely unwilling to read more than a few sentences because the lack of paragraphs make it sound stilted and unnatural.
  I think all of these are relatively easy to fix issues in all honesty, just a lot of simple editing for the chapters, and some additions to the description. I would also recommend longer chapters, although I'm not sure whether the first one is just an outlier because it's the prologue.
  I'll just finish this by saying that people should definitely read the story themselves before making judgements. I found that mine were just personal grievances more than anything, and the same will not be the case for everyone.