Is It Wrong to be a Vampire in a Dungeon?

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Description

At the end of YGGDRASIL, Shalltear Bloodfallen is mysteriously sent into a dungeon full of monsters. How will she react to being separated from her beloved master?

[Overlord X DanMachi Crossover]

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: NuclearNachos

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Rating: 4.0/ 5.0
Followers: 122
Views: 74,127

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★★★★★ 4.5
The way you are writing this mixes well Shalltears need to kill everyone and the plots need to have some characters to play with. You are able to show the never ending blood thirst with character interactions that make sens.
The story is progressing stedly, every interaction is fun to read and relevant to the story.
Grammar seems correct to me.
Shalltears character is nailed. You show her as this uncarring, evil vampire. This makes her not precive too much about others. You keep it simple and not introduce too many characters so every one of the introduced ones seems alive, multi-dimensional and fun to follow.
Overall the story is interesting, I like how you know not to kill every relevant character and pay close attention how to convince the reader that this is the logical corse of action. I would love to see Shalltear make a misteake, like a big one, what would lead to friendly characters trying to help her and finding out whe is a monster. I understand its a slipery slope and would easly kill the fic but i like to imagine how Bell is rejectiong the facts and trying to "fix" her. I am interested and wish you luck!